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Also Steampocalypse on Tapas, Ao3, and Anilist. A reader who's a fan of idols, BL, and shoujo. A writer for a long time who's considering writing webnovels for the first time. (He/him, young adult)
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Jul 28, 2025
I love your prose style, it's well written, evocative and tactile, and smoothly fits with the story. Your dialogue and narration are both well written, honestly pro quality. So that's why she's Cinderella, her life is rough, I see I do have one question, why do you bold the dialogue? It's a bit out of the ordinary and makes your writing somewhat less readable for me
I love idols, isekai idols is so good, I'm hyped She was left in the shadows, but wasn't she the star of the show, as the titular Cinderella of Cinderella?
To:Mai
Oh, I have no clue, I only made up this date because it came up and I don't really have a calendar—though I considered using the Chinese traditional calendar because I think it's cool, ultimately I decided not to tie it too closely to the real world, and that was the last I thought of it. (The year has significance though, it's ruler/government based which is why it's comparatively low. 134 years ago, it was Esi 19 or something).
Interesting worldbuilding this chapter! Tbh even without magic constant IRL exposure works wonders for language learning
Evan! Didn't Midori call him just a friend last chapter... Hell of a POV switch btw, the voice totally changed it was awesome
Oh trans himbo rights Though actually he hasn't been that dumb
So she's pregnant? 👀 👀 (Did I miss that before...)
Wah, this feels like truly original fantasy, while also having the vibe of 90s sword-and-sorcery kind of stuff. It's refreshing for sure
Oh I really like the diplomatic method of problem solving
Yeah, cause our current date system is so linked to historical events that happened IRL! We have a Christian (Gregorian) calendar based off of the birth of Christ, and October is the 10th month instead of the 8th because of shenanigans with Roman emperors, and so forth.
I would actually write it out more, use more sensations/tactile description and build in a more intense sense of emotion. Right now, it mostly just comes off as weird to me especially since it's foot-focused, but you can make it sexy and weird (which I wouldn't say it is RN, in my opinion)
Ah well in the last chapter you write her describing herself as regular "^^
Oh??? Love the worldbuilding, that travelers between worlds are rare but normal
Pickup line moment Level 1 monster, found and…cleared? No XP for Midori though I like how she’s figuring out when her panic attack will kick in lololol
Black+Japanese=green eyes? I do like the more diverse cast (enby spotted too) And also, how you capture the awkward yet liking each other vibes of some friend groups. Though, goodbye to them now I suppose~ An ominous feeling end
