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TotallyNotKasai

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New to writing, but loving it so far as it is really giving me an outlet for my ideas for a better Isekai world.

registered at: Jul 09, 2025

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Jul 31, 2025

I really hope the pendant actually is a part of the shield and that Karim's faith is rewarded in some way.

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:8

Jul 31, 2025

I like that Karim isn't so brazen about his disapproval, it's nuanced which I like because it seems like he accepts that it's a neccessary "evil".

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:7

Jul 31, 2025

Rina so brave for doing that, I know for a fact I'd be looking away. Seeing blood come out of you is so nauseating...

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:6

Jul 31, 2025

As I said previously, I really do love the inner conflict - I hate it when all the characters just get along you've done such a good job so far of making Selene's and Karim's feud feel real having the other characters reflect on it rather than just have the two of them go at it!

The Sun Will Rise Again

Chapter:5

Jul 30, 2025

To:Mara

Please let me know if you think I need to be clearer and less ambiguous - I was trying to keep it similar in vibe to chapter 3 but maybe that's giving the wrong impression. Might need a potential rewrite.

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:10

Jul 30, 2025

To:Mara

I was worried this chapter might be a bit divisive, I'll publish the next chapter tomorrow will hopefully clear things up. But no she's still in the same world - I'll leave it vague as things will be explained properly in coming chapters!

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:10

Jul 29, 2025

To:Mara

My god Mara you are on it as soon as I release a chapter, I really appreciate it! Glad you think that, there is lots more coming that should hopefully keep you interested!

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:9

Jul 29, 2025

To:Jake Mathew

It's not over yet king... 😩

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:7

Jul 29, 2025

To:WebbyWizard

Oh my god thank you finally someone has noticed! Yes it is a reference to the last line the in the chapter!

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:8

Jul 29, 2025

I quite like what you are doing by introducing the characters one by one and giving them room to shine.

Flowers Bloomed by a Poisonous Rose

Chapter:2

Jul 29, 2025

Absolutely love your cover it's so vibrant! You can see the passion in your writing, Rose is so cool as well!

Flowers Bloomed by a Poisonous Rose

Chapter:1

Jul 29, 2025

I really like your character they aren't too emotional, very compelling.

Another Worthless World

Chapter:2

Jul 29, 2025

Love your cover! Good opening chapter!

Another Worthless World

Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2025

To:Mara

Thank you I am glad it's coming across well. I feel like grounded Isekai are so few and far between.

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:7

Jul 26, 2025

To:FantasticDolphin

Thank you, it's because I have just this weekend read it out loud to my girlfriend and I found some of the sentences super jarring so I went back through re-read everything from that perspective and made the changes necessary.

Prospector’s Attempt at Sourdough Spellcasting

Chapter:4

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