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New to writing, but loving it so far as it is really giving me an outlet for my ideas for a better Isekai world.
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Aug 07, 2025
To:WebbyWizard
She'll be ok don't worry. Also thanks for all the support you've shown!
Yeah it always annoys me when healing magic is a quick solution because then it becomes a thing of "why doesn't everyone just know how to use healing magic?"
To:GrayNayru
Thank you, I am really happy with how it turned out!
To:RedPen
Glad you enjoyed it I hope you like the rest of my story as well! :)
Jul 31, 2025
Rina clutching up for the squad.
I really hope the pendant actually is a part of the shield and that Karim's faith is rewarded in some way.
I like that Karim isn't so brazen about his disapproval, it's nuanced which I like because it seems like he accepts that it's a neccessary "evil".
Rina so brave for doing that, I know for a fact I'd be looking away. Seeing blood come out of you is so nauseating...
As I said previously, I really do love the inner conflict - I hate it when all the characters just get along you've done such a good job so far of making Selene's and Karim's feud feel real having the other characters reflect on it rather than just have the two of them go at it!
Jul 30, 2025
To:Mara
Please let me know if you think I need to be clearer and less ambiguous - I was trying to keep it similar in vibe to chapter 3 but maybe that's giving the wrong impression. Might need a potential rewrite.
I was worried this chapter might be a bit divisive, I'll publish the next chapter tomorrow will hopefully clear things up. But no she's still in the same world - I'll leave it vague as things will be explained properly in coming chapters!
Jul 29, 2025
My god Mara you are on it as soon as I release a chapter, I really appreciate it! Glad you think that, there is lots more coming that should hopefully keep you interested!
To:Jake Mathew
It's not over yet king... 😩
Oh my god thank you finally someone has noticed! Yes it is a reference to the last line the in the chapter!
I quite like what you are doing by introducing the characters one by one and giving them room to shine.