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H. Shura

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Part-time game dev, part-time writer.

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Sep 13, 2025

Great job! This story had me on the edge of my seat. The characters and battle chapters were amazing. I’m only sad it ended now. I honestly wanted to read more and see where the story goes. Can’t wait for Vol. 2. Good luck and best wishes! 👍

Ashes of the Chosen: Volume 1

Chapter:40

Sep 13, 2025

Nicely done! I really enjoyed your story from start to finish, and I love how you ended it, setting up the next book. I'll definitely be there to read the next book, once you start it. Good luck!👍

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:40

Sep 05, 2025

I've been reading your story and enjoying it quite a lot. From its start, him telling Elisa that he is from another world in the very beginning and now here saying to his older brother, "you'll be my servant if you lose", are unique to what I have seen and read before. I wish you the best for the following chapters and I'll be there to read them. 👍

King of Cultivation

Chapter:6

Sep 05, 2025

To:Klaruga (Klaruga)

Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the rest of story and the names too. I would appreciate your honest word if it got boring. I'm trying to learn how to pace the story without it getting boring or dragging.🙏

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:2

Sep 02, 2025

Wow. I need to go back a few chapters and read again. The Siege of Evermere chapters were amazing, especially this chapter.

Ashes of the Chosen: Volume 1

Chapter:35

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

Thank you for your comment. I try to expand the detail of the scenes more in future chapters. As you read on she will talk about his memory even more.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:3

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

I would have loved to flesh out the world more but competition word cap is 1500 and in many of the chapters I had to cut a lot to be in the range and not go above it. I'm sorry for this shortcoming of mine, and I'm really grateful for the comment Thank you.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:2

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

Thank you for the feedback.🙏

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:6

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

Thank you for your level of engagement. I added more detail to the scenery. There is a back and forth between Alvis and Zephyr who are defending Kazuki compared to the rest of council who only care for the kingdom, that is why they did a forbidding act. Alvis is defending him logically and Zephyr is defending based on her conversation with him and the memories that she saw. I appreciate the feedback you are giving me.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:4

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

Thanks for commenting and reading in one sitting. The king has a backstory in the following chapters which will reveal more of his personality. 🙏

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:5

Sep 02, 2025

To:Iconoclast

Thank you for your kind comment. I added a line for more room detail as suggested. In regard to Hana and Kazuki, their relationship gets fleshed out as the story goes forward. I keep that in mind, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Sep 02, 2025

To:Klaruga (Klaruga)

Thank you for your comment and correction! English isn’t my first language, and I was trying to capture a feeling that exists in my native tongue but doesn’t translate directly. Your feedback really helps me see how to phrase it better. I truly appreciate your suggestions and any tips to improve — not only for this story but for my writing in general. Thank you so much! I'll do my best to make sure the story lives up to yours and others expectations.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Sep 01, 2025

To:Mai

Thanks, I appreciate it.🙏

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:3

Aug 30, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you so much for your kind words!
I’m really glad you’re enjoying the plot, and I hope you’ll enjoy where it goes. The poster has been getting a lot of love recently — I mentioned in its description how its made and who helped with the edits, but the inspiration behind it actually comes from the movie Face/Off. I felt it fit well, since it mirrors what happens without giving too much away.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Aug 28, 2025

To:RedPen

Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m really glad you enjoyed the start, and I hope the rest of the story keeps you hooked. I’d also really appreciate any constructive criticism along the way. Anything that can help me improve my writing means a lot.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

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