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H. Shura

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Part-time game dev, part-time writer.

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Feb 03, 2026

Wow. Can't wait for cour 2.

Snow at First Sight

Chapter:16

Feb 03, 2026

This was a great story Mike. Well done. I honestly didn't felt the time that was passing reading your last few chapters. I was so engaged with it, I could have read more chapters.
The characters, the world, the events, I loved all of it. Thank you for the time you put in writing this story.

Percussive Maintenance

Chapter:30

Feb 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

Good luck and take care. 👍

Snow at First Sight

Chapter:14

Feb 03, 2026

To:Chris Zee

Hey Chris 👋. Hope you're doing fine and well. I had no net and all and I'm been sending my remaining chapters with Mai's help.
Sorry if I took so long.
It's been great until now and I've been enjoying it. Really. I mean it. I'll appreciate it if you continue whenever you find it in yourself.
From normal reading stand point it's been great but if you want me to critically read it and give you feedback I'll have to read it from start again, which I will if you want.
Not gonna lie when you said you wrote a sex scene in chapter like me I was surprised but now I know I'm pushing the limits but what you did fit perfectly with this.

Snow at First Sight

Chapter:14

Feb 03, 2026

It was an emotional chapter but it wasn't that sexual. It was tame and good for what the story is about.

Snow at First Sight

Chapter:14

Feb 03, 2026

To:Mike Psellos

I need to read it to the end to see if introducing him now was bad or not but usually it's not bad to leave hints or show them just for a few seconds so the readers are aware of their existence. And if they are not going to be shown until later, drop some bread crumbs of them.
If you introduce soon it'll be a problem and if you introduce late it'll still be a problem. How you handle it is what matters.

Percussive Maintenance

Chapter:26

Feb 03, 2026

Nice work. 👍

Percussive Maintenance

Chapter:26

Feb 02, 2026

To:Mike Psellos

Thanks for the comment Mike. Yes not every backstory needs to be super heavy. I was tired of it so I made it lighter.
And yes, he'll now be working for the grace of god.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:22

Feb 02, 2026

Nice, nice. Ina's mind is constantly in the gutter. They are not helping too. They are bunch of enablers.
Anyways can't wait for all of them to participate in the cock fight between them all.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 02, 2026

Wtf is going on😂. It reminded me of a meme of a man visiting a proctologist then he realised both of the doctor's hands were on his shoulders and something else was in his ass. 😂

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 02, 2026

Getting burnt is one way to clean the germs.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 02, 2026

I was like, hmmm, the shower has a touch sensor high techmeulogy. Then it had a self destruct button. Wtf

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 02, 2026

Fking Mede. That little pos.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 02, 2026

Funny asf chapter... Nice title.

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:58

Feb 01, 2026

To:mindokusai

Thanks for the comment mindokusai. Hope you like them regardless of their timing. 😂

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:21

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