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H. Shura

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Part-time game dev, part-time writer.

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Aug 28, 2025

To:RedPen

Thank you so much for the kind words! I’m really glad you enjoyed the start, and I hope the rest of the story keeps you hooked. I’d also really appreciate any constructive criticism along the way. Anything that can help me improve my writing means a lot.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Aug 26, 2025

I'm hooked on this story and love everything that I've read so far. But the Mouseman had me dying.😂
If I'm doing a set and remember Mouseman Beginning, I would either choke under the bar or shit myself laughing.
Well done. Haven't laughed like this for weeks. Thanks. 👍

The School’s Princess Is Secretly The Streamer I Like

Chapter:4

Aug 26, 2025

Hi everyone. I cut the song that was in this chapter because it didn't flow the way I imagined. It didn't rhyme well, and it was too short. But I decided to write it here instead. The tune I had in mind was Lullaby of Woe from Witcher 3.

"Hush now, sailor, close your eyes,
Golden shores before you lie,
Lay your burdens, drift to rest,
Come ashore, O weary men,
In our arms the storm will end."

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:26

Aug 23, 2025

You've been nailing the hooks at the end of your chapters very well. They've kept me coming back, and I'm really excited to see what happens next. Well done!👍

Ashes of the Chosen: Volume 1

Chapter:24

Aug 02, 2025

To:oo-Suuki-oo

Thank you so much for reading and taking time to write that. it really means a lot to me. when writing the story, I see it as images and a scene in my mind and so I want people not only to read but also to see the story. With practice, I'm sure you can out do me in a blink of an eye.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

Jul 29, 2025

I like the characters and world you're building in every new chapter that I read. I also like that the pace of your storytelling has slowed down a bit which helps me keep up with it.

Rebirth of Science: Empire of Hope

Chapter:5

Jul 29, 2025

To:Bauyrzhan

Thank you for your kind words. I will gladly check and read your work as well.

Soul Switch: Transference of a Shut-in

Chapter:1

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