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H. Shura

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Part-time game dev, part-time writer.

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Jan 27, 2026

Winona converted him to their side.

Whispers Of The Mist

Chapter:12

Jan 24, 2026

Good good. Extra points for not only making Honey the ring 'bear'er but also giving him a kiss on the head. Nice nice ❤️

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:48

Jan 24, 2026

What a beautiful ending. The plane landed successfully.

Called To You

Chapter:39

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

Thank you for pretending. I might write a story for Vincent.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:13

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

Oh man, sorry to hear this. For the fat part, it wasn't that much fat to lose. Just something for a picky tailor to get bothered by. For cheating part, I don't know what to say. I just say this, all who cheat in this story will pay a very very heavy price.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:10

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

I hoped others would see him as you did but I got a different reaction towards him all the way. Their reaction did influence how I wrote him in the following chapters and I think that it's a bad to change what your writing based on others reaction. Derailing the original plan.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:9

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

Thanks for the feedback lolitroy. Comments like these are what really helps for improving. Later on I tried to touch on her feelings for him but I don't remember where I wrote it that he got cold after they started dating. He was caring at first and being the first boyfriend, she didn't know how to deal with that.
I really appreciate it because this is my first entry at spotlight and what your doing is helping me learn and improve. I really really appreciate it. Thank you.

Ryo is the obvious bad guy. That's why I'm writing him shity. I think one of my references was Jack Doherty for Ryo. If you know that name it makes clear why he is so shit as a character.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:8

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

That gave me a good laugh. I got the reference. 😂

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:7

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

I'll fix the semicolon when I get on my laptop. It's a typo. And yes want to get ryo out there. Thanks for the comment I appreciate it.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:6

Jan 24, 2026

To:lolitroy

Sorry for the super late reply. Thank you.
I haven't read others work yet, but it just happened. A lot of people thinking alike. On the same frequency I think.

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:4

Jan 07, 2026

🥲
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Baby Magic 101

Chapter:47

Jan 04, 2026

To:lolitroy

Thank you for reading and commenting. At the time of research, when I was checking the fees, I went with the middle range of the prices, since it was high level but not armed. But later on I might change it a bit.
And yes it was time for a big boy story. No more teenager mc for now. Especially when you get further in the story, you'll know why...

Temptation Behind the Spotlight

Chapter:3

Jan 04, 2026

Honey for mayor.

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:46

Jan 04, 2026

Congrats Mai. It was a beautiful slice of life, school.

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:45

Jan 04, 2026

Ooh. I'll miss them. Especially Honey's hugging nature and meows luck. 🥲

Baby Magic 101

Chapter:45

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