Nov 12, 2025
Why you killed her? Atsu ahhh 😭 it was going soo good and you just had to bring death ahhh. Nevertheless, I'm waiting to see how Ryota gonna find a way to break the curse or to be with his wife... Starting is really really good, I liked it so much.Suggestion: i guess, you should add a bit more tension when someone dies, and descriptions too, anything else is good, you'll improve by the time you finish this story I'm sure. Goodbye, Atsuko.... 😭