Sep 30, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

Aha okayy now I got it well yeah that way it'll work in your story pretty well during his backstory. And yeah I also think there are more main characters probably the same kind of Ren. Haha and you don't have to whack your head at the wall don't worry you can start next arc with a group photo and it'll work better and would be memorable if you able to jot that group picture at the starting of next arc with the end of the 2nd arc(just my opinion and idea) any way will work as long as you think it's going the right way.

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Sep 30, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

Hehe yeah Shin is abyss user of this world but who knows if he was there in this world before 🤭 well you'll know by the end I hope so and yeah thank you.

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Sep 29, 2025

Starting of the story is pretty good, to be honest i think it would be best if you had explained the Isekai'd trip in more details I mean like how he did isekaid although it's really good, and the concept is nicely done or one more thing i guess that man that was in 4 pics but not in the rest of them plays a crucial or somewhat a major role to the story am I right? Though i don't know I'll get to know after completing. Good luck! ☺️

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Sep 25, 2025

To:reem

Thank you, hehe... and yeah it's an interesting story so do make sure to read it completely I'm sure you'll enjoy it!!!

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Sep 25, 2025

To:Sawan Kumar

Ohhh my!! Really really? Thank you for your kind words!! I'm really happy that you think about the story like this and yep story is really crazy amazing, make sure to read it hehe...

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Sep 02, 2025

To:Deleted User

Thank you, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and the story as well.

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Aug 30, 2025

To:Mai

My apologies, in this chapter while pasting it got mistake so yeah but don't worry in later chapter's everything is okay and I'll resolve this chapter problem. Thank you for pointing out the mistake, it really helps me a lot.

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Aug 25, 2025

Thank you!! and yes i also do feel like the flashback is well executed, and that flashback at the starting is an important thing so do remember it.

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Aug 12, 2025

To:Miku

Thank you for the care you showed really and I'm okay now so yeah I'll keep it up and will make sure to end the story as best as possibly I can 😄

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Aug 12, 2025

To:Krixtor

Thank you for such a detailed comment I'm really glad to know you're enjoying the story and yes do look forward for upcoming chapters as story going to be more and more good with depth.

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Jul 20, 2025

To:Nato_otan1

I'm glad you liked it, may you enjoy it alot in upcoming chapter's too. And I'll make sure to give the best possible ending and story.

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Jul 17, 2025

To:Mai

Thanks for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the story, and hope you'll enjoy more while reading upcoming chapter's too.

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Jul 14, 2025

To:Akshay Kumar

Yes!! I'm glad you enjoyed reading 😄

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