Aug 03, 2025
Honestly, I wasn't totally sure about your story at first, but after reading the first ten chapters, I think I'm starting to see where it's going, and I liked what I've read so far. One of the things I like is how the main character isn't a young adolescent for once. When I saw there was a sauna scene I thought this is the part where it does the usual isekai girl blush trope and such and such, but it was a short scene and fit the tone without feeling forced in my opinion. I'm not sure if you could change anything writing wise, I think it is more because people prefer serious oriented stories rather than comedies, but overall, I think a more colorful or eye-catching cover could help draw in more readers. (The current one isn't bad at all, but something that really pops and shows off the comedic vibe of the story would get people to click faster). I hope you keep going with this, because I can see it developing into something really fun with a solid following if done right.
