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Aug 17, 2025
My favorite part (and the part I see least talked about) about timeloop stories is the fact that other characters have said things that they don’t remember. The fact that this is mentioned is already goated 😭😭😭😭
i like this chapter!! showed a lot about the world, the magic, and the mc all while keeping a level of tension that doesn’t fall. it’s peak ❤️
this chapter 1 gives like 90% of the things the original was lacking 😭😭it’s so peak
To:kazesenken
he’s a liar from birth ❤️ “She shouldn’t trust me. Nobody should trust me. Because I’m a liar. I’ve been one since I was born.” quote from chapter 65 😭
To:Atsutashi
ty ty ❤️ i have about 65 more chapters in the doc right now, so it won’t take long to publish more 🙏
thank you!! 😭😭😭
Aug 16, 2025
To:S K Lesker
ty ty ❤️ i tried making it understandable but still disorienting
that’s the plan 😭 hopefully it works 🙏
❤️
Dialogue feels so natural ❤️🩹 the transitions between scenes don’t feel rushed, and the narration doesnt either 😭 ts peak
the shift from tense opening scene into slow paced scene for introducing the mc is so well done 😭 since there wasn’t too much time spent on it, it didn’t feel wasted, but it was still hooking
To:Steampocalypse
❤️ my son will understand them eventually 🙏
ty ty ❤️🩹 unanswered questions become a very big theme later on
ty ❤️
Aug 14, 2025
Mc 2nd death speedrun any % world record