Oct 01, 2025
While this kind of story isn't something I often read, I enjoyed reading it.
I would say that your writing is pretty good. You have a good rythem building, nice expressions of body language that convey emotions and tension . Very smooth storytelling. Sakura been an artist have a nice kind of sub theme that is going on. It Have some potentials depending if you want to add depth to it.
Wish you the best with your story.
