Aug 27, 2025
It conveys rawness, honesty and confusion of the character fading thoughts. It's intriguing, you'll wonder if it's reincarnation theme or transmigration or parallel universe.
The cons in reading the prologue is like a dump-wall of scattered thoughts/memories. Organize it as shorter paragraph group by theme. Make the voice more vivid and sensory, as a matured INTJs, I now appreciate logical introspection, but blend it with emotional hooks. Try making it with physical sensations of waking in darkness ("My toes tingle, a shiver races up my spine...is this death?) then build the memories flashbacks.
Overall, it's cool and intriguing 😉
