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Jan 03, 2026

To:lolitroy

Oh... I will paypal you some money for your future therapy bills.
(I appreciate the critiques! Do not hold back!)

Sipping From the Caterpillar's Cocoon

Chapter:3

Jan 03, 2026

To:lolitroy

They're like garlic. I insert them in all the places they shouldn't go.
(Also don't push yourself to read if you don't want to. I promise I won't mind.)

Sipping From the Caterpillar's Cocoon

Chapter:1

Jan 03, 2026

To:lolitroy

They add flavor. Maybe not the correct ones, but flavor nonetheless!

Sipping From the Caterpillar's Cocoon

Chapter:2

Jan 03, 2026

"She shines as much as piece of chalk" oh that's gonna be living in my head rent free for a while. Same with "as the sunset suffocates under the moon." Also, thanks for the talking about the different dialects - and their names - so I have new terms to search up and compare.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:3

Jan 02, 2026

God, Soujiro, there's a clear difference between coral and fuchsia. It's like night and day. Take some color theory classes. Also, I love the non-effort she puts into naming her alts. I'd like to think the obviousness is an inside joke among her fans, especially when she's on a roll.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:2

Jan 02, 2026

Masterful opening line. The comments interjected between the prose really sells the idea of the words living rent free in Koharu's head. Great variation in the sentence lengths to control the flow. There are many, many great lines here, particularly the 93 alt accounts showing the lengths Korharu is willing to take in her online life (because 93 different emails holy moly)

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:1

Jan 02, 2026

Hi, Natsuki~ Oh, dear, she failed again.
Maybe the third time will be the winner? (If we get to see her again)

Your Sights

Chapter:21

Jan 02, 2026

If a small wolf girl told me to kill myself I would simply oblige.
On a more serious note, that's funny as hell that she picked up on that particular statement. Maybe she considered it commonplace after hearing teenagers throw it back and forth at each other.

PAWPRINTS: Field Notes on a Wolf-Girl

Chapter:2

Jan 01, 2026

Ayyyyyy title drop!
Also "I just threw a brick at you" is preferable to a bullet, considering who it's coming from.

Your Sights

Chapter:20

Jan 01, 2026

Nayden meets a wolf girl and immediately goes about destroying her ability to hunt for herself. (Or maybe she's done this intentionally to get close to him?) At any rate, someone is going to end up domesticated at the end of this and I can't wait to see who.

PAWPRINTS: Field Notes on a Wolf-Girl

Chapter:1

Dec 31, 2025

Yeah... With all the conspiracy talk and implications of the previous chapters, I'm not entirely convinced of Natsuki's helpful intentions. She jumped from "we're going to prove you're not monsters" to "blow them to smithereens" waaaaaaay too quickly.
Hope she gets more time in the spotlight later!

Your Sights

Chapter:19

Dec 30, 2025

Publicly available pregnancy metric. Not a bad idea for a deterrent, the idea that your crime will be posted for everyone to see and know about and shame you for.
But ooooh the intrigue of the anti-purists tracking the two down. This conspiracy grows ever more complex!

Your Sights

Chapter:18

Dec 29, 2025

I'm curious: does spicy ramen getting Mahotonas drunk have a real world equivalent that you based it off of?
Also, I can see that emotional cliff in the distance, and that drop into depression is gonna HURT.

Your Sights

Chapter:17

Dec 28, 2025

Yumie is correct: Braith did not take her to dinner; and even worse, he took out two other people right in front of her that same day. He'd better make it up to her soon!

Your Sights

Chapter:16

Dec 28, 2025

To:Caelinth

Those fancy words for "shiny" are just too good to pass up, you know?

Sipping From the Caterpillar's Cocoon

Chapter:2

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