Oct 20, 2025
Really liking the word selections in the first half of this chapter - much lighter with a "hey I like this Ishara character" vibe to it. Almost funny, in a sense.
"Physique was quick" - I am not sure that works, perhaps something like reaction or response time?
I want a witty retort to the Scandinavian Dwarfs - I demand a laugh opportunity here :P
I love a bashful awkward boyfrannnndd moment :P Poor 'ickle Ishara❤️
@mara's point about him simply existing affecting the world - Cool opportunity to include minor happenstance and more opportunities for comedy - I wanna piss myself laughing here :P
