Aug 08, 2026

Oh nooooooo oh nooooo say it ain’t soooooo!

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Aug 08, 2026

To:Mara

I think I'm auto eq'd but it's hot so I don't care!

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Aug 08, 2026

To:Shizori

Just wait for chapter 3!

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Aug 08, 2026

Poor Andes - I had a feeling this was coming!

Hero Avii is my fave though!! 😘

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Aug 08, 2026

To:Steward McOy

Facts! 😂

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Aug 07, 2026

To:Prufrock

Thanks for Reading Pruf! For tongues you must wait for chapter 3 😜Your feedback means a lot!

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Aug 07, 2026

That title though :P

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Aug 06, 2026

Just desserts? I think so!

Fuck Sebastian!

Great descriptions of the breaking bones to my dismay lol 🦴

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Aug 04, 2026

I did not see this coming at all! I didn't trust her but didn't know I'd walk away from all of this with Mommy issues lol :P

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Aug 04, 2026

Noooo da puppies!

Such a great battle description - these things are super creepy! 🩸

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Aug 04, 2026

This is so good! Honestly I think this is my vibe of what I like to read - the commander is such a likeable character and the priestess, although hot, is a bit of a nagger! Great First Chapter!

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Aug 04, 2026

To:Moon

Hahahaha! What a twist that would be!!!

Thanks for the great feedback and for reading!

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Aug 04, 2026

To:Moon

Best Girl - she is definitely deserving of that title!

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Aug 04, 2026

Hounds eh! There is something brewing and I wanna know more. Intense fight scene though - well done!

Oh and …

FUCK SEBASTIAN!!!

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Aug 03, 2026

To:Mara

will he tho? Who knows!

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