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May 09, 2026
To:Ryuukarize
Nooooooo!😭😭
Apr 13, 2026
She hasn't even started yet. More suffering is yet to come.
Apr 10, 2026
Ahhh! Who doesn't like a prideful but smart girl?❤️
The romance between them is really as ridiculous as physics in general.😭
To:Tsuki
Thanks for reading tsuki-chan. I tried my best to keep the story grounded while also mixing my own fantasies into it. 😆
Apr 09, 2026
This was literally the first thing that came to mind. When I thought I needed a good ass female lead😅
Mar 18, 2026
I salute your dedication for trying to explain quantum physics🫡🫡
Not the wave particle duality 😭😭😭. Quantum physics is traumatising
Okay.. honestly a great start. Though I have some suggestions. There are some minor punctuation errors. One more thing try to break up large paragraphs into small ones it really helps enhance the reading experience.
Interesting premise. The trauma of being assaulted at an early stage stays with people for a long time, I like the mc, I hope he doesn’t go down the typical path, hopefully he finds some love.
Mar 17, 2026
Wowww! Your writing is incredible when it comes to sensory detailing's, they really add life to your plot. But i would suggest that if you're going for psychological aspects as well than first person narrative would've suited better but that's just my opinion. This chapter is the best example of show don't tell
You should focus on the sensory details, it adds color to the story and increases immersion. one more thing, try to break up long sentences into smaller ones, Too long sentences ruins immersion. Also try to reduce these ' I asked, She said hesitantly' instead of telling show us through their body language.
interesting chapter. But you should slow down the pacing a little. too much is happening in just the first chapter. One more thing you should use italics to differentiate between internal thoughts and narration. The starting narration about the butterfly effect is quite introspective. You just need polishing and it can be a serious contender
Mar 14, 2026
Miyu for the win😂
A loner otaku making the first moves on a girl is something I thought i would never see. Note: I really like how Hiroshi hides his loneliness with sarcasm and humor. it would be awesome if we could explore this lonely side of his even more in the later chapters.