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Currently working on my entry for the MyAnimeList x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2026 The Heroic Fantasy. Not much else to say :P

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May 07, 2026

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My New American Teammate Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:6

May 07, 2026

They got 67'd by Chubu

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Chapter:5

May 07, 2026

Can't help but think of Yuma from Yugioh when seeing that name 🙃

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Chapter:4

May 07, 2026

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Chapter:3

May 06, 2026

To:otkrlj

Thank you Silver Wolf :^)

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Chapter:34

May 06, 2026

To:otkrlj

what :flop:

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Chapter:33

May 06, 2026

To:otkrlj

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Chapter:31

May 06, 2026

To:Kirb

Lmao lol

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Chapter:27

May 04, 2026

More thoughts/feedback: try and vary your sentences up a bit. Some of them have the same structure/begin with the same things in super close proximity to each other. Also, with the sentences related to dialogue, I think you should have them on the same line as the dialogue, otherwise it seems out of place. Like for example, the "Shut up" followed by the "Alyx responded" sentence.

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Chapter:7

May 04, 2026

Some thoughts about the latter half of the chapter. I feel like the paragraphs are way too big and things drag on with it. Feels like it could have been condensed down to make room for some other things, possibly other parts of the story instead of all the details you included. (it's also a fairly abrupt ending to the chapter)

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Chapter:6

May 04, 2026

To:Saika

Thanks for more feedback. I don't think I can do another chapter with Maple's POV, but will explore with playing with POV more for future things I write (probably for whatever the next contest is).

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Chapter:28

May 01, 2026

To:otkrlj

:^)

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Chapter:30

May 01, 2026

To:Saika

Stay tuned, I'll have the next chapter up in a bit :^)

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Chapter:29

May 01, 2026

To:Saika

Interesting to see how you view things. I kinda wanted there to be some drama so that it's not just all happy without any substance, so I made sure to give Maple some of her own thoughts on things as opposed to just following Paige on every beat. Maybe I didn't write it well enough for that to come across, or maybe it's just how you view things. Not really sure

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Chapter:28

May 01, 2026

To:Saika

I had it mentioned in an early chapter about her not being able to find information on the house. Back then, she didn't have the names of the spirits or any leads like that, although I could have probably explained things better to show why she couldn't do more research. It's another of the things I would have done better in hindsight, but it's now more just something to learn for the future.

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Chapter:27

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