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Aug 03, 2026

To:J.C. Chambers III

Wish I could include more of her, but on the off chance I'd get to produce sequels to this novel, she's definitely returning later in the story along with some plot relevance.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:6

Aug 03, 2026

To:Kyotosomo

The rework of any scenes involving the villagers has been completed, I'm feeling a lot better about where they are now. I think these scenes were the novel's one major glaring flaw, so hopefully now it's down to relatively minor stuff. However, I will continue to go back and improve chapters based on people's feedback. And once I've completed the story, I will of course go back and do a full refinement run of the novel, working on things like pacing, prose, etc.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2026

To:J.C. Chambers III

These three certainly can make it easy sometimes.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:3

Aug 03, 2026

To:lolitroy

Yeah, in an effort to speed up the pacing and avoid devoting too much time to characters that won't be important past the first story arc, I ended up replying too heavily on tropes for the villagers. I've gone ahead and reworked all the scenes involving the villagers so that they have more depth rather than just existing for the sake of furthering Nora's character development / the plot. I think all the scenes with them are significantly better now.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2026

To:Golden Plume

Maybe she'll get a new much cooler wand later 👀

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2026

To:J.C. Chambers III

Hopefully she'll get to conduct more experiments (and ideally more interesting ones) after she's gotten to the Summoner Academy, given the wealth of different monsters that'll be there.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:2

Aug 03, 2026

To:Elin

She can't help it, she's just built different.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2026

To:Golden Plume

Definitely plan on including a decent number of cozy moments given Nora's a cozy kind of gal, though she'll still definitely throw hands or trade insults when the moment calls for it ;)

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2026

To:J.C. Chambers III

Thanks :D

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2026

To:Elin

Thanks! I look forward to people getting to their dynamic, particularly once the story gets to the Summoner Academy.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2026

To:AbyssMonkeyWrench

I'd definitely struggle to write this in third person haha, I think first person should hopefully really help Nora's personality shine throughout the novel.

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The Little Witch Who Loves Slimes Just A Little Too Much

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2026

Poor Pebble 😭 Alpherson is still a real one though

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Chapter:7

Aug 03, 2026

I like the running gag of her defeating powerful foes with various ridiculous objects, also think it's interesting she has to balance trying to pull of faking this big bad without doing anything too unethical.

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:5

Aug 03, 2026

The boyfriend subplot is amusing, will be entertaining to see where it goes.

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:4

Aug 03, 2026

Pebble is a great / cute protagonist name

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The Cynical Saintess's Guide to Fabricating Heroes

Chapter:1