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YuzuMango

Hello community! Thank you for welcoming me to Honeyfeed.

I like writing stories with strange titles and characters. It makes me happy that you like them enough to view this profile, too! Or if you think they're weird, that's also fine! As long as you're having fun, my goal here's done, wahoo!

Games and novels across the world!!!!! 🌈

registered at: Apr 11, 2026

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Aug 10, 2026

Thank you Taylor! Yes, that seems to be an oversight—not sure if I can edit it at this point but I'll revise it when it's all said and done.

I've had a lot of trouble with framing devices in the past so I'm really happy to hear from you that this one seems to be working out so far :]

Midnight Myths at Allider's Most Mysterious Inn

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2026

Cute ending. I can def see the effort you put into looking at the Paladin armor, here!

The Longest Night

Chapter:3

Jul 23, 2026

Plot wise, I’m curious as to which way it’ll go. A kiss, a sacrifice, or a double suicide… maybe all three, I’ll have to read on and see!

The Longest Night

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2026

Note for the future, try to avoid mixing second person with third person. Only bringing it up because I am a big fan of the rest of your prose and without that it’s pretty nearly flawless :)

The Longest Night

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2026

To:YuzuMango

If you want to do a quick edit - change car to caw. I think that’s the sound the crow’s trying to make here

The Longest Night

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2026

The prose, especially around the skia concept is amazing! I felt like I could imagine everything in my mind without having to struggle to do it.

The Longest Night

Chapter:1

May 23, 2026

To:sameeeee

sometimes our subconscious minds make the best writers!

Fish Don't Know Happiness

Chapter:11

May 21, 2026

The whole word is turning into murky water...

Fish Don't Know Happiness

Chapter:15

May 21, 2026

Strangely appropriate that someone possessed by a fish would get harpooned : [

Fish Don't Know Happiness

Chapter:11

Apr 25, 2026

To:Taylor J

Thank you Taylor! I used to do a junior statesman club... maybe I still remember how to come up with weird names from there 😅

Can a Board Game Boy Fall in Love with a Gamer Girl?

Chapter:1

Apr 20, 2026

i like how you write some lines of dialogue in another language, here... adds to the mysterious vibes

The Draugen and the Drowned Man

Chapter:3

Apr 20, 2026

Wow! This is really well written. By far one of the easiest stories to picture in my mind. :]

The Draugen and the Drowned Man

Chapter:1

Apr 20, 2026

incidentally, is the name logan inspired by the wolverine? might be out of pocket, but the guy on the cover gives me rugged werewolf vibes...

Night Of The Living Mpreg

Chapter:6

Apr 18, 2026

even as an adult, most of my furniture comes from ikea and/or the curb, hahaha.

Can a Board Game Boy Fall in Love with a Gamer Girl?

Chapter:1

Apr 18, 2026

cute flirtation

I Don't Want to Be Fixed! I Am the Evil Duke!!!!

Chapter:3