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May 18, 2026
To:Stoneflew
Also wow I really do owe an apology I thought I had introduced them in the last chapter. It isy first time writing a novel so I sometimes get my writing mixed up I'll update that really my bad I owe you guys an exclusive Riku POV intro
Thanks man well the original chapter ended up being way too long so I had to like just cut it into two that's kinda why the endings a bit weird done worry in the second part well get some interactions trust me 😅.
May 17, 2026
Nice story has potential ill stick around to see where U take this in chapter 2 or chapter 1 😅
May 11, 2026
Sorry about that I've fixed the formatting now😅
Wow! I did not even notice that at the end! Uhh the preview when publishing is pretty deceptive😅 I'll fix that
May 10, 2026
Sorry it took a while but it's finally time to descend into the world of SACH. Please drop your feedback on the chapter and the story so far it will really encourage me and help me to improve as the real story now begins
May 08, 2026
Thanks man 😊 It needed a bit of a cool down at this point in the story 😅
May 07, 2026
Also overall this chapter is nice really feels like the kind of behaviour based on the kind of person I felt Dray would be but I guess anyone would also get annoyed by being constantly reminded your time was ticking even if they meant to help . Even I would get angry 😢
Kinda got a question might be a bit too late but im gonna ask anyways, what's an MIP?😅
May 05, 2026
Thanks man noted... There still a bit more to tell though cuz I know theres a lot of unexplained stuff yeah I anticipated the info dump so I planned to reveal them slowly when they are relevant thanks for the feedback 😁
Well it's not going to be the first time he's lied to her 😂. But thanks though it's the first time I'm trying to explain a bit of the world so it was a bit tricky but I'll try to improve as we move along maybe I'll explain by showing and less dialogue is that better?😅
May 04, 2026
There is always a catch 😂
Tia seems really cute here nothing bad better happen to her big brother 🥺. These moments of peace are always suspicious
May 03, 2026
Well Fuku did say he wanted to talk with Riku over breakfast but..... to be honest that didn't really happen 😂 the type of convo couldn't sustain that in the end but... No spoilers
😂 Thanks man really love your feedback I'll still try to improve on what you said😅
