Jun 03, 2026
Currently at chapter 12 and I’m really enjoying it so far! I think the concept is genuinely very interesting, the relationship is really cute, and one of my favorite aspects of your writing is definitely the descriptions and emotional atmosphere. The introspection and small details make many scenes feel soft and immersive.
If I had a small piece of feedback, I think sometimes I’d like a little more progression or movement alongside the descriptions and introspection, a bit more dialogue, interaction, or emotional development within some scenes.
I also feel like the characters could maybe have been described or developed a little more early on, just to help connect with them faster from the beginning. But maybe you’re saving that for later.
That said, I’m genuinely enjoying the story and looking forward to reading more!
