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Nice to meet you. I am a reader first before a writer. Feedback on my works is welcome (even being read itself is amazing, haha...)
Jul 28, 2026
The setup is there and you described each paragraph with creative words and vivid imagery. This is but the beginning...
A fresh style of writing in third person POV. The dialogue proceeds smoothly and they have distinct voices. I learned a lot. Thank you!
Jul 27, 2026
First. I can feel the suspense escaping from the fire in the last part. Too soon to say this by hope Reagan finds better days...
Jul 26, 2026
A troupe inverse! And it's done with finesse, too. She exudes just the right amount of snide.
Jul 25, 2026
It is different. Sakata_Neko's writing has a voice in it, like Vaste's reacting to the world the writer described. On Chapter 3 now seamlessly. What freezes my mind was Vaste's goal beyond salvaging Glaze.
Curious what negative level increase (decrease?) does. Either way, Salaryman against fantasy world is unique. Keep it up.
Jul 24, 2026
Oohh I like that bit of an insensitive old man commenting on heart attack. It was a double dramatic irony.
A protagonist with deliberate omission of the protagonist's complete identity! It's brain-teasing. I thought Number Unknown was a slime since the Protagonist kept saying about slippery. Definitely not a slime.