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Nice to meet you. I am a reader first before a writer. Feedback on my works is welcome (even being read itself is amazing, haha...)
Oct 05, 2026
The story is so cute. I am glad the misunderstanding cleared up. Pleasant surprise for their first names.
Only 6 chapters in so I know it is only the beginning, but each chapter flows smoothly and they're easy to follow. Despite putting the "power system" here and there, it never looked like an exposition. ☺️
Oct 04, 2026
You have a good prose and a way to describe Annette's interiority. You want to root and help her. I only read until this much chapter so I guess the story is just turning.
Nice take on the story telling process.
I prepared for tension but I am so glad the romance resolve quietly and sweetly.
I am glad about the heartwarming ending. You have a good method to convey emotion and what's beneath between the dialogues. ☺️
Braced for treasure hunting, finding it was mixed with political aspect. Precise presentation of how power controls information.
The story and the mechanism of Three-sticky note sticks with me. Saburō has a noble character.
Thank you so much. It's difficult to display the setting fully with so much of word budget, but I am glad that my choice to kinda gloss it over didn't damage your read. 🥹
Oct 03, 2026
To:Kuma Writes
All in day's work. Happy to help. 😊
Your passage flows smoothly. I prepared myself for horror but this story cuts me ever so slowly and I felt like I am deserving of every cut. I learned a lot from this. Thank you.
To:Honey Ann
Thanks for reading it!
I like the twist, the space where you made the reader sit with the twist and the calmness of The Collector.
You write action and the sequence with clarity and pacing. It's easy to follow, especially when you had to slip in dialogues between them.
I really like the world-bulding and the action choreography. Together with accessible dialogue, I think you can write expansive LitRPG.