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Nice to meet you. I am a reader first before a writer. Feedback on my works is welcome (even being read itself is amazing, haha...)
Oct 02, 2026
You conveyed the emotion inside the letters beautifully. Thank you for warming my afternoon.
This is a good read. I really like Vinz, Matz and Joanne dynamic as siblings. Koutei-san's characters have unique "voice" for them. The pendant in the end is fulfilling.
Oct 01, 2026
A pirate's story is always dangerous, since most of us only know naval and pirate life from what popular media says. Kuma treaded the risks well and deliver an adventurous story engine within two popular troupes. What caught the heartstring was the part about Walnut and I find that I want to care more about Walnut more, since Kuma brushed Walnut's reaction toward the Compass on the periphery, but even then it aches me as the reader. I can't wait to know more of Kuma's next characters. ☺️
The Traveler's and Strep's voices are distinct and their banter is fun. I burst out laughing seeing the Naked Artifact. The LitRPG element makes the story more accessible.
Sep 30, 2026
To:Mike Psellos
Thanks so much for reading until the end!
Good catch! Damascus at that time has mixed demographic, but scholarship to each religion was reserved to each of their respective tradition. Unless you were a diplomat or a scholar, learning a new language is either privilege or continued exposure. Khabbab himself was not a philosopher, so he spoke Greek with rough grammar.
Thank you so much for reading! 😆
Sep 27, 2026
To:Isabella Smith
Sure. If I could read the whole 41 chapters just as fast as you, I'd be a genius in my field.
Sep 21, 2026
To:Terrycat
Much appreciated as always, Terry and HF team.
To:Ava
Hi. Before they get you, let me just tell you that this comment is almost refreshing. It must be tedious jumping from one entry to another. The deadline is in September 27th so I honestly doubt changing art would promote much, so for your own safety, I will have to decline. I did check your Insta, if that brings you comfort. Thanks for reaching the other contestants. May you meet better prospects.
Sep 16, 2026
The initial dialogue just hit you right away. You brought ache with such a short passage.🥺
Aug 31, 2026
I see Lysithea; I instantly clicked. Good concept and badass last line for chapter 1.
Aug 29, 2026
I am glad that the irony landed! Thanks for reading.
Your prose is clean. It shows you likely edit and reread it many times before posting it. Inquisitor stories.. I haven't read before and it's refreshing. I want to connect with Jeb more in chapter 1, especially what does he want and the thing he finds urgent.
Aug 27, 2026
Congrats on finishing! Tbh I jumped right to the ending but I have always wanted to read this whole. Not many can deliver bard stories with dynamic like this.