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Someone who simply loves telling stories and reading them.
Sep 09, 2026
Emrys carrying Jorvain after the cyclops fight was really sweet, and I liked Maelis making Roba feel a bit better too. Feels like Jorvain is slowly figuring out where Roba fits in with everyone. This one was pretty long though, maybe a slightly shorter chapter would be easier to get through
Loved the bonding between all ladies and ice cream well now I want some too window shopping after is a nice addition And the ending hook may be its fifth one
To:Penda
Thank you so much, and welcome to the beginning of Sybill’s story! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful comment. And yes, that makes perfect sense! I’m especially happy you noticed the fashion detail—that was exactly what I wanted it to do, quietly show how much the world had changed around her without simply stating that time had passed. It means a lot that you picked up on that. I hope you enjoy the rest of her journey!
Ren suddenly turning into a full-on history professor was hilarious 😂 No wonder the others are starting to wonder if this is really their Ren.
Really solid opening. Roba being surrounded by people who already feel like established heroes while he’s still questioning whether he belongs gave the chapter a nice underdog feel, and I liked the whole Sol Viridis introduction too. The ending with them finally setting out worked well.
To:Stellaria
Thanks for reading and your kindest comment stellaria the reveal will take time for sure 😂but the story moves on
Thank you so much for continuing to read and support the story. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave your thoughts as well.
To:rhedak
Point noted and much appreciated
Thanks lot thats actually a great idea and much appreciated i will find a place to plant his appearance somewhere because I did skip that part in the beginning although its appears at the end
Thank you for pointing out the factory demolition but the have enough evidence by now that the manipulation and harm these people have faced for years was related to that factory hope that makes sense
She sure did and she worked hard for it thanks for turning up and the comment
To:Silly hun
I am sl glad you like it tysm fo the read❤️
This was a really fun chapter, especially Akari and Yasuke’s whole dynamic and the arcade scene with the teddy bear Their chemistry is already really entertaining. I would definitely give this one another proofread though—I noticed quite a few spelling errors throughout.
Seeing just how much the world has moved on while Kinto stayed trapped in its little bubble was interesting. And “Mad magus. Mad scientist. Mad exile. Mad everything.” 😂 Renji really summed himself up perfectly there.
The fake curse on the guard was funny 😂 but the bakery locking its doors and families pulling their kids away really showed how deep the hatred for witches runs in Diosveil. Atrina barely gets through the gate before the whole city starts treating her like a public enemy, so the title definitely fits. She deserves way better