Oct 14, 2026

Sherya really surprised me in this chapter! Despite being terrified and having no proper combat training, she still found the courage to protect the injured knights. . And just when things were getting dangerous again
Teiran arrived with his ice magic! Talk about a dramatic entrance! 😂and i bet that ice form looks amazing 👏

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Oct 14, 2026

It's genuinely heartwarming to see how much kindness Teiran and Luca are showing Sherya, especially after everything she's been through. I was actually feeling relieved that she was finally somewhere safe, but then we arrive at this creepy, ominous town where something is clearly very wrong. And just when things couldn't get any more unsettling, thousands of arrows come raining down on them! 😭 What a cliffhanger!

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

Ooo intrigued already loving the story so far

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Oct 14, 2026

There's definitely a storm of romance brewing between Sherya and Teiran!
Sherya isn't exactly unaffected either! Her being so self-conscious about their closeness, worrying about everything from her heartbeat to how she smells, was absolutely adorable. Meanwhile, Luca remains an absolute chatterbox, and his childhood friendship with Teiran makes their constant bickering even more entertaining!

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Oct 14, 2026

Luca is absolutely hilarious! 😂 He's already invented an entire romantic scandal before the poor captain can properly explain himself. And it's both sweet and a little sad that Sherya doesn't even know how to respond to a simple compliment. I love how Rusha has practically become her little guide to communicating with people! These two are going to make quite an entertaining combination.

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

Full disclosure, this was one of the most difficult chapters for me to write. Sylvie and Sybill's backstory is probably one of the saddest parts of the entire story. It really is heartbreaking that Sybill never got to experience a normal childhood. But don't worry, there's plenty of laughter and silliness ahead to make up for it! 😂 I hope you'll enjoy seeing how Sybill's journey unfolds and how she grows along the way. And I can tell from your comments just how invested you are in the story, which genuinely makes me happy. Thank you so much for reading! ❤️

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

The boy is certainly brimming with overconfidence! 😂 And the irony is that he's already falling for someone who couldn't care less about him. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far! Thank you for reading and leaving such lovely comments. ❤️

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

And he claims to be some crown prince! 😂 The alpha has already taken hold of his senses before the war has even begun.
Psychological warfare 😂

Thank you so much for dropping by and reading! ❤️

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Oct 14, 2026

What a journey! The tournament was genuinely entertaining to read, and Nora's adventures delivered on everything the story promised: epicness, lovable characters, and an engaging plot. Vincent, Petra, Lucas, and even Arthur have all left quite an impression!

My favourite part, though, remains the opening arc with Nora and Vincent. Perhaps that's just the kind of storytelling I personally enjoy most.

Congratulations on completing the novel! Wishing you the very best of luck in the competition!

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Oct 14, 2026

Bold claims i see

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Oct 14, 2026

Fearsome opponent and such an intense battle — Nora really had to fight for that win.

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Stellaria

I never took it as criticism at all. 😭 It was more of a sudden realization on my end that I had basically spoiled the chapter I loved most, so that one was entirely on me. 😂

And I’m really glad you loved the art! The ladies honestly turned out absolutely fantastic. 😍❤️

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

Thats good observation. You picked up on all the important moments here.

And yes, knowing Sammy was genuinely loved makes the whole time difference hurt even more. For his father, losing a child for two years would feel unbearable, even if Sammy only experienced ten or twelve days himself. 😭

Thank you so much for following along and always leaving your thoughts.

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

There is only one alpha in this fight, and it definitely isn’t Rowland. 😂
I’m very happy you’re already shipping them, but no spoilers from my side. You’ll just have to find out where that dynamic goes.
And yes, Rowland acting out because he has different motives.
Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such fun comments. I really appreciate it. ❤️

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Oct 14, 2026

To:Vanica Cheri

Good observation. You really picked up on Sybill’s inner core there — she is incredibly powerful, but underneath all of that, she’s genuinely kind and gentle. ❤️ The way she took care of Sammy says a lot about who she is, even if she doesn’t always understand humans very well.

And yeah, poor Sammy. 😭 Unfortunately, being in a position of power comes with people wanting to use, hurt, or eliminate you.

Thank you so much for always turning up and leaving such detailed feedback.

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