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Aug 05, 2025

I find your narration very unique. It always seems like there’s some sly diss you’re gonna drop whenever a character is introduced. It’s very silly. Now for the characters, Furian or however you spell it, despite some gruesome scenes and his strange behavior, I still picture him as a cartoonish psychopathic jerma985. Is that a stretch? It is almost 11 and I need to eep…

Memoria (wip)

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

Does she speak her language, or is she buzzing like a maniac while chasing the poor girl. I'd shit my pants.

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:2

Aug 05, 2025

can she... fly?

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

This is one heck of a beginning. I hope things turn out ok for Yamane.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2025

You got a knack for action. I’m just torn between it reading like it’s for young children with the intention of it being for teens.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:3

Aug 01, 2025

I’m… grasping at this.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2025

If there’s one way I don’t want to die, it’s falling. RIP

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2025

It's funny because shes like, trying to be tomboyish and cool, but it falls on cringe, and its cute. Dunno if that's the intention.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:3

Jul 31, 2025

Rewind powers? Or am i mistaken? The plot armor is strong with this Jenn character. From what i gather, i imagine she looks like a combination of Momo Ayase and the Tifa Lockhart, with a dash of extra cyberpunk. If you've described her before, idc, this is what i've assigned.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:2

Jul 21, 2025

Now this is cool. Im comprehending it. A little wacky, and especially original.

It’s cringe to remember but I used to play vrchat and it kinda gives that vibe that people just have their own world lobbies they show off or have taken over with their wacky avatars. Just that with more grit n idk, a cyberpunk vibe? Whatever the case is, I dig it.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2025

Wasn’t expecting something so graphic, but then again I went in raw. What’s a synopsis anyways? I think it hits better without.

Cool stuff. A classic pegging, down to square one, or death, whatever is happening at the end here. A different world? Whatever he’s getting knocked down a peg and that’s all I care to know. Will continue when I can, work and drawing got me struggling to read.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2025

Very straightforward. I won't be a stickler for the errors because that isn't what im here for, but you've got an interesting world and adventure on your hands. Keep it up and push for that 50k word goal or whatever it was.

Finding tanaka san in another world

Chapter:2

Jul 21, 2025

Hope the lost friend took the same light tunnel. For some reason it gives early IT movie vibes though i know thats not whats going on.

Finding tanaka san in another world

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2025

erm, akshually, there's nothing 'clean' about being hit by a truck and then crushed between it and a traffic pole. I've google searched this and watched plenty of instagram death reels to confirm this.

Quantum Mage: I Alone Control All The Elements

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2025

This is very

Quantum Mage: I Alone Control All The Elements

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