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Aug 08, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

It is and there’s more long ones to come and some short. The length is entirely dependent on if I feel like enough things have taken place throughout the chapter. Thanks for reading, once I’ve dropped my next chapter I’ll catch up on yours!

Brought By Storm

Chapter:3

Aug 07, 2025

To:Fragment

The role of gods in this story is very important.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:6

Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

He’s just some weird alien/god thing being in human disguise that manipulates time and events and he describes all his relations in business employee/employer speak. Shoot, he wears a suit n tie after all.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:6

Aug 05, 2025

I find your narration very unique. It always seems like there’s some sly diss you’re gonna drop whenever a character is introduced. It’s very silly. Now for the characters, Furian or however you spell it, despite some gruesome scenes and his strange behavior, I still picture him as a cartoonish psychopathic jerma985. Is that a stretch? It is almost 11 and I need to eep…

Memoria (wip)

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

Surely they get high in picoberries at some point. Also I was holding on to this thought but when they mentioned being their “employer,” I immediately jumped to the G-Man.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:6

Aug 05, 2025

Again I’ve read this but now I’m like, closing in on where I left off. All this splittin’ got me rummaging aroun ere’ ya’know?

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:5

Aug 05, 2025

Ok I’m coming back to this too but wanted to at least comment that I like the old guy. He’s silly.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:4

Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

Yes I just saw, got me confused for a moment, should all be good now

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:3

Aug 05, 2025

Oh you split it. Lol!

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:2

Aug 05, 2025

Am I going crazy? Did you add sometging before this chapter because I feel like I’ve read it before. I’ll look back rq.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:3

Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

Nah dont worry, i didn't find it a big issue, its just not what i expected.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:5

Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

That’s surprising being that it’s my shortest chapter since the first one.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:5

Aug 05, 2025

Does she speak her language, or is she buzzing like a maniac while chasing the poor girl. I'd shit my pants.

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:2

Aug 05, 2025

can she... fly?

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

This is one heck of a beginning. I hope things turn out ok for Yamane.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:1

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