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Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

He’s just some weird alien/god thing being in human disguise that manipulates time and events and he describes all his relations in business employee/employer speak. Shoot, he wears a suit n tie after all.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:6

Aug 05, 2025

I find your narration very unique. It always seems like there’s some sly diss you’re gonna drop whenever a character is introduced. It’s very silly. Now for the characters, Furian or however you spell it, despite some gruesome scenes and his strange behavior, I still picture him as a cartoonish psychopathic jerma985. Is that a stretch? It is almost 11 and I need to eep…

Memoria (wip)

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

Surely they get high in picoberries at some point. Also I was holding on to this thought but when they mentioned being their “employer,” I immediately jumped to the G-Man.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:6

Aug 05, 2025

Again I’ve read this but now I’m like, closing in on where I left off. All this splittin’ got me rummaging aroun ere’ ya’know?

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:5

Aug 05, 2025

Ok I’m coming back to this too but wanted to at least comment that I like the old guy. He’s silly.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:4

Aug 05, 2025

To:Fragment

Yes I just saw, got me confused for a moment, should all be good now

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:3

Aug 05, 2025

Oh you split it. Lol!

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:2

Aug 05, 2025

Am I going crazy? Did you add sometging before this chapter because I feel like I’ve read it before. I’ll look back rq.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:3

Aug 05, 2025

Does she speak her language, or is she buzzing like a maniac while chasing the poor girl. I'd shit my pants.

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:2

Aug 05, 2025

can she... fly?

Flygirl In The Hole

Chapter:1

Aug 05, 2025

This is one heck of a beginning. I hope things turn out ok for Yamane.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2025

You got a knack for action. I’m just torn between it reading like it’s for young children with the intention of it being for teens.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:3

Aug 01, 2025

I’m… grasping at this.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2025

If there’s one way I don’t want to die, it’s falling. RIP

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2025

i got a little confused who was talking when the orb came in. im assuming the orb is intervening, but the part where 'Mary narrows her eyes' follows the orb's text might be the culprit.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:2

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