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I write when it feels right.

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Aug 04, 2025

To:haru

Just give him a longer beard and wizard robes and you've got it.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:1

Aug 01, 2025

You got a knack for action. I’m just torn between it reading like it’s for young children with the intention of it being for teens.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:3

Aug 01, 2025

I’m… grasping at this.

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:2

Aug 01, 2025

If there’s one way I don’t want to die, it’s falling. RIP

GRIP: Dragged Into Another World With You

Chapter:0

Jul 31, 2025

i got a little confused who was talking when the orb came in. im assuming the orb is intervening, but the part where 'Mary narrows her eyes' follows the orb's text might be the culprit.

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2025

Black rocks for power? Coal?

The Ranger from Reythe

Chapter:1

Jul 31, 2025

It's funny because shes like, trying to be tomboyish and cool, but it falls on cringe, and its cute. Dunno if that's the intention.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:3

Jul 31, 2025

Rewind powers? Or am i mistaken? The plot armor is strong with this Jenn character. From what i gather, i imagine she looks like a combination of Momo Ayase and the Tifa Lockhart, with a dash of extra cyberpunk. If you've described her before, idc, this is what i've assigned.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:2

Jul 31, 2025

To:Armorien

I've simplified the number of characters down to 4 new kids instead, making this a lot more digestible and also easier on myself to write. So 3 & 4 are updated with the new setup.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:3

Jul 31, 2025

To:Fragment

An update to that has been made, and now my characters have been chopped down to only 4 introduced children.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2025

Now this is cool. Im comprehending it. A little wacky, and especially original.

It’s cringe to remember but I used to play vrchat and it kinda gives that vibe that people just have their own world lobbies they show off or have taken over with their wacky avatars. Just that with more grit n idk, a cyberpunk vibe? Whatever the case is, I dig it.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:1

Jul 21, 2025

Wasn’t expecting something so graphic, but then again I went in raw. What’s a synopsis anyways? I think it hits better without.

Cool stuff. A classic pegging, down to square one, or death, whatever is happening at the end here. A different world? Whatever he’s getting knocked down a peg and that’s all I care to know. Will continue when I can, work and drawing got me struggling to read.

telosya ~sunder heaven and slay evil~

Chapter:0

Jul 21, 2025

To:Armorien

i felt it was the best way to do "generic and stylish" that doesn't seem out of place in medieval setting. If these kids are getting drawn, i don't want them in rags but i also don't want them sporting the overdesigned fantasy mess you'd see in gacha.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:4

Jul 21, 2025

To:Armorien

had the same feeling but didn't want to dedicate a chapter to descriptions and instead let them flesh out over time.

Giving them a paragraph each would make what's supposed to be a short role call and introduction feel like forever. I could do with cutting out the role call out as having "happened" and have their names get revealed when needed.

This is something ive crushed my brain on and just decided to abandon before i get stuck in an endless loop. Thank you for reawakening this. (im just bein silly at this point, thanks for readin.)

Brought By Storm

Chapter:3

Jul 21, 2025

To:kazesenken

is aura a solo leveling thing? or are you referring to aura farming? unfortunately aura is just part of their preaching magic religion.

Brought By Storm

Chapter:1

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