Feb 10, 2022
To:Gilgameshuu
No wonder they haven't updated it...You're a f***ing prick! There wasn't any tense shifting, but maybe they fixed it. I believe every author is unique. Maybe the beginning is fast, and it slows down! As for the hating, just use an emoji and leave it! Your only redeeming quality from what I can see here is your profile picture. What are you, their mom? If they wanted an editor, they would hire one! If you're one, stick to your clients. English teacher? They aren't your student(I don't think...) You're just MEAN. Grammar, spelling, punctuation, sure. Asking for a full redo and hating is just being a D**kweed.