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She/Her Idiot Asexual
I am a Coffee/Milk Tea addicted Illustrator, who likes to write and draw comics!! Big fan of horror, romance, and comedy
Currently trying to finish up my art degree!
You can find me and my art on Instagram!
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Jul 14, 2021
This is such an interesting idea!! I love how thoughtful the interaction between Hal and Mae is, although this is a dialogue-heavy story, it's easy to tell the character's emotions but just what they say and the little gestures they do! Very chill read🤗
ooo! Great Job! I love Fight Club type stories, this is awesome so far and we get introduced to our characters right away! Just a suggestion, I think your paragraphs are a bit close together, putting a space in between them would really help the flow!👍
NOAH!!! The emotion in this chapter is strong😭but beautiful! Also the action scene in here is amazing, you could really see how Dolly overcomes the monster by trying to predict where it'll be, feels satisfying! The little flashback between Dolly and Noah just makes everything so much sadder.
Jul 13, 2021
To:Pearlyn.M
I originally wrote that section with a bunch of swear words and then I remembered it was supposed to be PG 13 so I took them out😂😂
To:Joe Gold
Oh!! thanks for letting me know, I'll be sure to keep that in mind!! and Sinstagram is my noncopyright version of Instagram haha, I just combined sins + Instagram lol! I think you have such a fun and unique story!! when I saw the second chapter update I immediately went to read it 😍
haha they might!!👀I tried rollerskating recently and I really liked it, although I feel over a lot LOL
Thanks for reading!!❤️
Ooo I really love this story idea, the horror/comedy genres like this are my absolute favorite!! Keep up the good work, I'd like to see how far Jack goes in this Death Game! 😆
This is a wonderful chapter!! The tension and drama are so clear in every line, you have such an impactful writing style! Excited to read more! 😁
AAAA thank you for the support as always!! ❤️❤️
Jul 11, 2021
AAAAAA once again your dialogue is so interesting and dynamic!! Each character feels so unique by just how they speak and react! The contrast between Runo and Netty with Dolly and Noah is super entertaining!
Jul 07, 2021
Great job!! I really liked the dialogue between Dolly and Noah, they have such natural chemistry! I love all the cute moments between them, even when they're in an intense battle! 😁
Aaaah the horror, the cliffhangers!! The way you write is amazing! ❤️❤️
