Jul 29, 2021
To:znf
Ah, thank you for the amazing comment! It's great to hear honest feedback from readers and I will definitely take this to heart!
I understand what you mean about the abruptness of the police being involved, unfortunately, I threw it in there right without much planning because I thought it would be weird if Misha and Elias didn't tell Honey about it as soon as they could (it would almost be like they were tossing her into the fights to get arrested LOL), but yeah I don't like how I put it in either. It's much too sudden and out of place since it was never mentioned earlier, thank you for bringing it to my attention!
If I ever do a rewrite and polish some of the plots points out, I will take your critique!! I've never written a full story before so this is super helpful in improving my skills!! I really appreciate your comment and that you enjoy reading my novel! I hope to bring you more enjoyment with later chapters!! ❤️🤗