Jul 04, 2022
To:Bubbles
Yes, I read plenty. science fiction, nonfiction, light novels etc but it doesn't exactly mean it'll transfer to writing skills. I appreciate the feedback because as I was writing the early chapters I did note that I was switching between perspectives often and wasn't sure if that was correct but decided to press on since this is being done weekly.
Some points that I do disagree with is establishing the entire goal and purpose of the novel in the first chapter and being blunt with the character's traits. My favorite LN that I read took a similar approach and I loved them for it. Plus I want it to be a character driven story where you get to know them and their motivations better as the story goes on.
But your thoughts were interesting and something I, well thought about. Anything you liked about it? If not that's fine but a way to improve is also playing to your strenghts as well as improving your weaknesses.
Thanks for taking the time to read it though, I appreciate it.