Sep 15, 2023

I have to say: I loved how you narrated the entire chapter. I really felt that vibe when in an anime they are explaining a character's past to you.❤️

As for Claire, I feel so sorry for her. I have an idea what's going to happen next, but I'd better find out for myself 😞

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Sep 15, 2023

The way he says goodbye to Toren is very cute, but I'm sad to think that I won't see my favorite beast boy or Mia again 😭

By the way, reading the chapter title gave me chills. I'm very nervous to finally find out about Claire's past.❤️

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Sep 15, 2023

Oh my goodness, the big decision has been made! Tremendous chapter, those last words between Mia and Jun left me cold.👏

I could feel how hard it was for Mia to say goodbye. It takes a lot of courage to face that rejection the way she did. Without a doubt you created a very admirable character, and that is exceptional.❤️

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Sep 15, 2023

A mysterious girl? I don't know if she will be good or bad, but at least she was very helpful in carrying paper and charcoal 😂

I love the message you are giving: what do you want? Sometimes we don't stop to think about something so simple.❤️

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Sep 09, 2023

To:minatika

There is a 99% chance that Marin and Leonel will end up together, but Robin hopes that 1% ends up winning 😂

HAHAHA I'm sorry if Robin and Andrea look like a silly couple, but when you're young and in love it's inevitable 😜

Thank you very much for your words, I had already told you before but your comments helped me a lot to finish this story. In 2021, I think, when this contest started, I didn't finish the first story because I didn't find enough motivation to continue writing.

During this contest I wanted to take revenge for what I couldn't do before. You don't know how good I feel to have finished this story, and that wonderful people like you have taken the time to read it. Truly, thank you very much for everything ❤️

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Sep 09, 2023

To:minatika

Hi Minatika! Don't worry, the last days of the contest we were all in a hurry 😅

I finished the story and started checking other things I had to do, that's why I haven't been able to finish your wonderful novel either. I'm so sorry 😞

In the next few days I promise that I will read what happens with Jun and Claire... And I have also add you on MAL as a friend! I hope you saw my notification 😁

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Aug 27, 2023

This is how all festivals should be! A place to be drunk and dance uncontrollably😂

Without a doubt, one of the moments that made me laugh the most was that dance between Roki & Toren🤣

And it all ends with some beautiful fireworks. 🎆

This chapter was so fun and upbeat, you gave me that good festival vibe😁👌

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Aug 27, 2023

I think this is the second time you've made me cry (or maybe the third, I've lost count)😂

Seeing that people will start to forget about Claire filled me with a lot of sadness, but I really felt Jun's despair when Claire didn't answer his call.💔

Thank God she appeared, and I already calmed down.❤️

What can I tell you? it was an amazing chapter, My friend Minatika 😁

By the way, the dance scene reminded me a bit of Harry & Hermione in the penultimate movie. Was it an inspiration?😱

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Aug 27, 2023

The romance in this chapter was at its best!❤️

Nao always has the right words for Takashi, I love the mutually supportive relationship they have.😍

I'm sure Takashi will come back stronger for the next match, and I have no doubt that his friends will be rooting for him.👏

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Aug 27, 2023

I love how after a very intense fight, you looked for a way for the characters to reconcile❤️

Jun and Hiroshi are a love, I'm already seeing a 'bromance' there😍😂

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Aug 22, 2023

To:minatika

Marin is a very daring girl, poor Robin, he suffer a lot for her little sister. The good thing is that Leonel is a good man 😍

Christmas dinner went very well, so the moment of confession had to take place in a special site. It might not be the prettiest field, but the view was totally worth it. ❤️

I hope I put the right emphasis on that "I like you". I wanted to write something nice, that it was a confession in which it will be noticed how much it cost Robin to say it, I hope I have achieved it. 😅

As always, thank you very much for stopping by to read my novel ❤️😁

(And it makes me very happy that you liked the cover, a very dear friend made it for me) 🤩

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Aug 20, 2023

To:Shulox

Yes, I am Mexican, that's why I knew it... I've watch more bad games than good ones from my national team 😂

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Aug 20, 2023

Wow, it was amazing how Mia was able to speak in front of the nobles!😱👏

"A delicacy from the Forests of the rising sun" I almost died with that 😂

It was an excellent plan that Mia executed to perfection. Now I would like to see that Claire can have that special moment with Jun, I think she deserves it after she brought that sauce from the grocery ❤️😁

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Aug 20, 2023

I loved the way you described every little detail of the festival atmosphere, you certainly transported me to Rivasvale 😁❤️

Otherwise, excellent chapter. I will not stay with the doubt, and I will see how the problem of the duke's fool is solved! 😤

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Aug 20, 2023

NOOOOOOOO 3 vs 1 and ended up in the post. What Takashi did is indefensible 😭

By the way, if you want to laugh for a while I recommend that you look on YouTube for "Mexico vs Haiti 2008", Takashi's play reminded me a lot of that tragic match😂

It was an excellent chapter! I hope that with Nao's help our protagonist can regain his confidence 😁

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