Sep 14, 2025
To:AuthorAtish
Thank you, Atish. I understand the philosophy being a bit jarring, I'll work on that and find a balance with time, I hope. All I can do is keep writing and learning. Mostly did it to paint a picture and set the tone...dunno if it was a good move but I will consider feedback, and yeah, it does depend on perspective. Dialogues I had to rework like 2-3 times before it got to where it is now, so I'm glad you liked it. As for them being fleshed out, I didn't feel like they should be, as things stand. You'll see more of them, though. So don't worry about it for now. As always, glad you're here