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Sep 13, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

I understand your concerns. Felt like dragging on the first act was the best way to go, hence why it's like this. While it could put people off, it feels like it's the right thing to do regardless. Trying to set the tone in the scene before properly introducing the character. It's a gamble of sorts, though. Without a hook to capture the audience, I am aware that the pacing and presentation may cause people to drop it. It's not that I'm unaware, but thank you. I'll keep it in mind for the future. Once again, thanks for being here.

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What the Stars Couldn't Fix

Chapter:1

Sep 12, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Glad you're here, brother

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What the Stars Couldn't Fix

Chapter:0

Sep 07, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Pfft you and me both. Politics and especislly stuff like power play within department staff is insane

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:6

Sep 07, 2025

To:AuthorAtish

Have always been glad to be here, brother

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:4

Sep 07, 2025

Pfft, this man is just awkward when it comes to common sense. Of course, wild animals will come at you. It's funny, really. Props to Ayano. Can smell a tragedy though

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:7

Sep 07, 2025

God imagine being one step away from your dream project and then being denied the chance to see it through... Tugs at my heart. Can see his anger and frustration and the annulment.

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:6

Sep 07, 2025

I like how he's open to question. Subtle show of his desire to teach/learn/openness to new ideas. Scholar's attitude right there. Everything about Anu is implied very subtly, and it's well-done. The world around him is described adequately enough, even leaving gaps for our imagination to fill.

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:5

Sep 06, 2025

Hmm... Anu is very complex. On one hand he's a dick who pushes people away. On the other hand from the subtle moments we see he doesn't WANT to push them away but he thinks he has to whivh is sad.

Ayano I kinda understand. It's like... Wanting to be friendly and hoping you can at least stay friends cuz u want a good relationship with everyone around u as unrealistic as it sounds. So she follows him around even tho he's a dick. Maybe a part of her knows he doesn't wanna be a dick and she's trying to help but fails miserably so that makes her seem very timid and like a person who seems to like having people walk over her.

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Korou: Journey Beyond Forgiveness

Chapter:4

Dec 14, 2024

Well, I love how you describe the world even more. Seems like it's your forte here. Adding the slight ominous touch to it too as if you think it's subtle enough not to catch my eye. No Honkai inspiration is one without (w)holesomeness

Avalon

Chapter:2

Dec 13, 2024

Ok amazing job introducing the world, creating a picturesque sight in my head by describing the scenary and the popular attractions and adding to the richness of Sidharth's small world. That's what caught my eye first.

Looks like a positive wholesome story in a good way but knowing your past works and the way you usually write, I don't trust you anymore LMAO

Jokes aside, this is a huuuge leap. Keep up the good work man. And take care while you're at this

Avalon

Chapter:1

Aug 23, 2022

To:flameball918

Ty! Glad u liked it

Life x Like

Chapter:0

Aug 06, 2022

To:Moon

Glad you liked it. I just dish out whatever is on my mind when I write. On the spot shit so I didn't know how good it was. Glad u think it's good. Had help on the cover. Glad u liked it

Life x Like

Chapter:0

Aug 06, 2022

To:ItsukiMarebito

I'm glad u enjoyed this prologue. This genre as a whole is something I've never tried writing and something I've never thought I'd write. I'm glad you enjoyed the prologue. I hope I can maintain this level of quality and I'm glad to have you along for the ride

Life x Like

Chapter:0

Jul 29, 2022

Damn chapter 1 is, pretty solid too. Didn't have the random POV switch either which is awesome. Sakura is based waifu and Minato be relatable. I like how you made their dynamic look like. Looking forward to the next one

I Planted a Girlfriend

Chapter:1

Jul 29, 2022

Based chapter! Been waiting for this to happen and it's finally here. Loved this prologue, aside from the quick unexpected shift to 3td person, everything was beautiful

I Planted a Girlfriend

Chapter:0