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Sep 07, 2021

To:rinka_desuu

This is a fate worse than unbreathe. But I want invreathe now but no! Aaaaaaah!! (Screams internally and bawls my eyes out mentally)

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:23

Sep 07, 2021

To:rinka_desuu

I have already finished cats hour when I was typing this rn..but this book has been hitting me with depressed things from this chapter onwards... it was sad...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:19

Sep 07, 2021

To:rinka_desuu

You can do minor edits like these but not major changes ig. So edit away 😁

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:18

Sep 07, 2021

This was a great entry! My fav from this prompt. Loved everyone and I cried a lot in the end. Kinda sad its ending like this... not kinda tho. I'm legit trying not to cry cuz its ending like this... i think u mentioned something about extending this, if so, I cant wait!

And happy birthday.. ik I'm late and all but couldnt leave the wishing part alone!

Looking forward to more from you in the future. Take caree~

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:26

Sep 07, 2021

This...was an awesome read! I'm crying again cuz its ending like this...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:25

Sep 07, 2021

Tgis time I'm crying tears if joy... this chapter legit tabe me Kimi no Nawa vibes which made it even sadder.. ggs

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:24

Sep 07, 2021

Aaaaaaaaaaaaah! WHY?? WHY DO THIS?!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:23

Sep 07, 2021

Wow this was a great chapter. Finally we will get to know what happened to him. It's time for max binge!

I again noticed some problem with the change in tenses like you are changing between past and present tense at times... there were a few other minor errors. I suggest you go through it again and fix them.

Sorry I'm being too blunt. It's just my nature when it comes to these things...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:22

Sep 07, 2021

Idek what to say at this point. This is just soo good is all...
Currently at the brink of sadness cuz of irl things and chapter 19 lol. So my comments may be a bit... less wordy...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:20

Sep 06, 2021

wtf is that fking woman. I just- why do this???
It was so damn unexpected it pissed me off.. Now I actually can't hate him... I would act the same way if I were in that position. I am crying... great job...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:19

Sep 06, 2021

OMG imagine if Mikejima meant that part as an external irl confession thing! Now I ship them too. That end. THAT was awesome! And to add, once or twice, I noticed you switching tenses. Past to present tense and things. So please review and edit it later. It's an awesome chapter overall tho!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:18

Sep 06, 2021

omg, I cri! I Hope Makejima gets over his fear soon...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:17

Sep 06, 2021

Lol, this chapter made me laugh a lot. The scene when she was about to die and Makejima's trash-talking the game! Onto the next one... later.

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:16

Sep 06, 2021

The change! He changed!!! Into a shy (maybe) scared (definitely) cute boi!!!!! Time to binge the next one!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:15

Sep 05, 2021

Afraid? Of women? Sounds like even the least relatable character (in my perspective atleeast) has something I can relate to... Many girls and women I've met are... Intimidating for some reason.

But damn I still angry at him! He insulted my girl Hikari like that. But hope nothing bad happens to him. Want to see his character development if any.

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:14

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