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Sep 04, 2021

Ayy Mashirooo! I like the niceness and damn I'm crying a lot now

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:13

Sep 04, 2021

Finally I have the time to read. And what is going on??? Will kurokawa..

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:12

Sep 03, 2021

Ayy an amazing chapter. Just a small error. It's "... sitting on one of the branches of the tree." And not just "branch"

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:11

Jul 27, 2021

The chapter was interesting. Dolly and Noah were badass. And the mosters are yandere kids which is good.

The things said about the world divided into realms with different things inside was amazing I'm interested in knowing more and can't wait. Noah reminded me of a shota with a childish personality.

Keep up the good work

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:1

Jul 27, 2021

Damn a great start. I could easily imagine what I was reading. Meaning your writing was damn good. On to the next one!

REALM ASSASSIN

Chapter:0

Jul 26, 2021

To:rinka_desuu

Aye! You know I will.

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:10

Jul 26, 2021

An amazing chapter. I now start to like the guys parents. And never thought that his brother would defend him cuz he was distant. The way that the case was settled was also cool.

After the Hajime mom left, the female teacher was referred to as he/him instead of she/her so please fix that.

Great work can't wait for next one

The Hero Who Returned Remains Traumatized in the Modern World

Chapter:6

Jul 26, 2021

Good chapter. I just noticed some grammatical errors.

In the dealing with kids line. It should've been

I am scum when dealing with them. I could just leave them crying even if they trip in front of me.

(Leave instead of left and trip instead of tripped)

There was another place where it should've been

Sakura-chan safely passed on (instead of passes on)

And

I wonder why Sakura-chan was crying under the sakura trees.

(use was instead of is)

And lastly I noticed this
"If you end up telling me in the future. I'll be glad that you trust me enough. No pressure"

(trust instead of trusted and pressure instead of pressures)

I suggest rereading the chapter and look for grammatical errors. Other than that it was an amazing chapter. Gambare!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:10

Jul 23, 2021

Omg, this one was so emotional...Kana, like damn, that scene was just....so, in the end, she is living with the guys, just like I kinda predicted. I am happy. This made my day. *pats Rinka* and also *pats Hikari* hope she won't face the loneliness again...

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:9

Jul 23, 2021

SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT NOOOOOOO DAMNNIT

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:8

Jul 21, 2021

To:mugmoth

Can't wait!

The Hero Who Returned Remains Traumatized in the Modern World

Chapter:5

Jul 21, 2021

dammit! Again. Imagine if the dude died my god. Again the realisation that he's not in his old world now... hit me hard. But tbh it wasn't as sad as the others. Great narration and dialogue as always ggs

The Hero Who Returned Remains Traumatized in the Modern World

Chapter:5

Jul 19, 2021

Dialogue be drawing me into the series. Love it!

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:2

Jul 19, 2021

Damn I like the start. This is gonna be good

The Sequence of Kai

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

To:rinka_desuu

Yea Hikari was so damn kyuut. Despite there being a third wheel, it was damn fun!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:7

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