Jul 11, 2021
To:Erii
Good Point! While I can understand disliking that, the tone is meant to convey Surtur's struggle at the moment. The waves keep crashing down, he keeps moving, yet barely anything changes. He must struggle almost endlessly.
I will keep this in mind however for further chapters. But for the beginning, I believe the droning appropriate. Thank you for the feed back Erii.