Jun 14, 2022
To:Tomoyuki
It does seem I have a bit of consistency issue with him. It's difficult and I may rewrite details about him and his behavior since in situations like these one can't really just say that "his sort of veneer of indifference towards his parents' death is starting to crack as the realization of the truth sets in." That would just be an excuse, and while it might be a "nice" excuse, it wasn't detailed well enough to excuse the inconsistencies in his character. But as it stands, the inconsistency may be a bit of a problem until I flesh out his character through the chapters.