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Trying to write something. I admire NiSiOiSiN and also am completely obssessed with Oregairu
Also, I’m not a native english speaker
My MAL: https://myanimelist.net/profile/ImNOTAmOtaku
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Jan 08, 2022
What a exceptionally original epic tale never seen before
Also, I hope Natasha likes BDSM, maso girls are really hot tbh
Jan 03, 2022
I don’t remember how but I’m sure I’ve read this before, maybe you shared it on discord months ago.
It’s still as good as the first time I read it
Dec 30, 2021
Of course I’m totally fine. Always have been.
Dec 27, 2021
1- What the fuck 2- I love this
To:Gilgameshuu
Whip me into writing more then
Dec 26, 2021
Oh no
Dec 25, 2021
To:Pearlyn.M
It’s not a movie actually, but a game. After searching up a little bit I discovered it’s called a “We Happy Few”
Good does that game scares me
Dec 24, 2021
This seems pretty interesting. It also has this vibe, this aura that I liked a lot. I liked a lot this style and these metaphors too
All of that said, you really need to proofread this, it’s full of things like “were” instead of “we’re”, or Daniel being very frequently spelled wrong, sometimes as Danial, sometimes as Danail
Why are you doing this to me
This is… something
At the same time as I can very vividly picture this first scene, it doesn’t flow very well. The POV change was quite jarring too.
But still… there’s something quite alluring in all of this, though I’m not sure what—maybe it’s how well I can imagine some of this playing out in my mind? I don’t know
This is lowkey terrifying. It remembers me of that game I forgot the name where everyone has to take their happiness pills
Yeah I also find that game somehow absolutely terrifying
Yo what the fuck
Dec 21, 2021
There really isn't much happening so far. The only thing that picked up my interest is what happend to this Gilbert guy and figuring out why does Debora doesn't like the city. She getting a passport seems like just an excuse to make her go to the city, so... meh
Dialogue isn't bad but with the chapter being only the two talking with pretty much no description at all made it quite stale.
I liked the atmosphere you created, and I like the intrigue behind Damien and his relationship with Sora. There's not much I have to say besides this though.
Excited to see how it will develop from there
Dec 19, 2021
I’m happy you liked it!