Oct 15, 2021
It's happened
before,
I know.
...After about a week of reading and reacting to each newly published chapter in silence, here is (at last) a comment! The imagery evoked from Fiona's numerous senses is almost pungent, and the storyworld has quickly weaved together along with that key mystery. (Something is off in this place. But what?) A whiff of the truth seems to be in every corner, and also not.
To add – this broken-line style of writing is something I haven't seen much, or at all, but I think it nicely complements the narrowed scope which is common between perspective and place in the story. I've been enjoying reading Something's Not Right. It's become something I look forward to reading everyday when I get the chance!
The last 21 grams got me
