Sep 18, 2021
To:Anwario
aaaahhh thank you for all that! 😵
Yup, this was written to be entered into that MAL x Honeyfeed contest! The chapters in this book were basically written in the timespan of a week, so it does look pretty rushed, right? XD Still, I'm happy it's got your interest!!
Creepy was not the intended effect of the creatures (may need to revise all of their designs lolol), but I am glad you'd like to stay at least a bit longer for the root of that mystery XD That part is hopefully gonna be slowly unraveled through the chapters, or at least brought closer to the conclusion until the nineteenth hour!
And – what you pointed out that I could improve on is super helpful. Thank you again! Both are things I did notice I kind of skimmed over in exchange for writing speed to meet the deadline. Shall be referring to the points in your comment for the rewrite! Syntactic restructuring and more detailed characters in design and, well, character (XD), coming up... next time! And, for the third time, thank youuu
