Aug 06, 2021
I didn't think Amber was going to be important to the story. I like the way you've been introducing characters throughout the story but not throwing them into it and instantly revealing everything about them. I feel like I'm getting to know more about them slowly as I would in real life, which really helps the flow of the book.
The only critique I have for you at the moment is you should go through your chapters and make sure there is not any accidental additional spacing between your paragraphs. It doesn't look like it serves any purpose and I'm sure it's not intentional, or maybe it's just the site, I don't know.
