Sep 04, 2021
I feel like a lot of the stories I've read that involve video games in some way were written by someone who played Pong once. The way you portray time in this chapter, the setting with unreal aspects and Yang/****/Yin(?)'s motivations to just keep trying over and over through trial and error until they have mastered combat really left me with the impression that this chapter melds the mediums of gaming and traditional storytelling in a way I haven't experienced before. I'm excited to see where the story goes next! 🙂👍
