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Oct 15, 2017
To:ThatGuy025
Thanks for the comment!
Sep 22, 2017
To:SilverFeather
Thanks!
Sep 20, 2017
To:Gerry Hines
Hey, thanks for pointing that part out about the big wall of texts. I do try to split them up, I have gone and done more splitting, hope it works now. Glad you like Byakuron - he is quite fun to write about.
Sep 10, 2017
OOh! Good spot about the 'obelisk', yes, I do mean obsidian. Fixed. Thanks!
Thanks for the comments. Noted about Flaros > Flare, i think the change was simply Flaros' spur of the moment 'have-to-make-up-a-fake-name' situation. I'm glad you still enjoy it, I hope you like the rest!
Sep 06, 2017
Re requesting commission, that's pretty much how I've done it in the past. There are now commissioning tools as well, but to be honest I haven't been the most active on DA for years so I don't know how to use it.
Sep 03, 2017
Thanks for the comment! And yes, I see what you mean about the info-dump. You are correct though that there's a ridiculous amount of history and backstory (mind, there'll be more trickling in along the way!). I'm glad you like the names too :D
Thanks! I'm glad you like it and thanks again for adding it to your library. If you're interested in the artwork for the series as well, you can find them at the link in the synopsis :)
Aug 24, 2017
To:Deleted User
Thanks so much for your comment! I'm glad you like it. I try to upload a new chapter every week on Fridays :)
Aug 05, 2017
I agree with the comments below re the premise and I look forward to reading more. Same comments as those below, you can breakdown the block of text by starting a new paragraph every time there is a new idea. Good luck!
