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Jan 08, 2025

Bro on a streak, his father being the head is crazyyyy. Turning your own son into an experiment is more wild

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:17

Jan 08, 2025

This is an iconic origin story wtf

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:16

Jan 08, 2025

Youuuuu were the chosen one feral, you were supposed to bring balance to the force not leave it in darkness 😭

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:15

Jan 08, 2025

I am witnessing Ferral have a joker origins meltdown

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:13

Dec 24, 2024

Ferral is wrong, she lowkey kinda right ngl. He just doesn’t accept himself, and hasn’t experienced the world enough. As the story progresses in this part, I miss the happy brute of part 1 :/

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:10

Dec 22, 2024

And so it begins, huh? Feel like he desperately wants his humanity back, but I think he fails to realize that he already has it. His social trauma really is preventing him from accepting himself, maybe Leona and the others were right a couple chapters ago. Being an experiment is what makes them stand out, so why change? Good stuff tho fr.

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:9

Dec 22, 2024

Bros on a streak with chapters

Howl: Extermination

Chapter:8

Aug 09, 2023

Drop a chapter, yo

Howl

Chapter:39

Mar 26, 2023

Finding Feral, now we gotta find Caprio Suji to make a chapter

Howl

Chapter:38

Oct 14, 2022

To:Archibald

I'm glad you like it, it's taken quite a lot of time to prepare. I added you to discord as well. :)

PANDEMONIUM

Chapter:0

Oct 13, 2022

I have to thank you first and foremost, for taking time out of your day to submit art for my novel. I saw the notification today, and I couldn't believe someone did that. I thought at first it was just a comment, but no it was a cover. I love it. You made my day :). Do you mind if I use it? I like the tone of it. Thank you so much, and much love my friend.

PANDEMONIUM

Chapter:0

Oct 11, 2022

Also, quick question who made your cover for your novel? I'm in need of one myself lol.

The Spirit In Me

Chapter:1

Oct 11, 2022

Alright, so first things first. I think you can make their inner thoughts/ monologue a bit more distinctive. Dropping the usage of " " and using ' ' instead would be better imo. Also making their inner thoughts in italic would distinguish it more. Although, I understand you do it to show more emotion with " " at the end of the quotations, just a tip of mine. Read the comment already about the perspective and it did throw me off too ngl. It'll be better to not do that and throw the reader around. Also, lol is Riff like an alter ego of yours? The character comes out as pretty personal, so just curious. Other than that, I believe this novel has potential and I just like the entire government thing. Look forward, to seeing the growth of this novel and your growth as an author :)

The Spirit In Me

Chapter:1

Oct 10, 2022

This forest thing reminds me of that one arc in TDH. Ahhhh, back in those days.

Howl

Chapter:27

Oct 10, 2022

"Once this is all over..." death flag line lmao.

Howl

Chapter:27

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