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Jun 29, 2022

Sereya is already becoming my fav

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:2

Jun 29, 2022

Ngl you managed too make me shed a tear with this chapter. The way you conveyed the emotions in this chapter was a masterclass. I'm so pumped too read more!

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:1

Jun 28, 2022

Thanks for the advice. I like your writing and will continue too read your novel!

The Consequence of Saving the World

Chapter:0

Jun 28, 2022

Alright I'll say you had a strong beginning for your first chapter. I enjoyed reading it but there were a few errors I saw as I continued. Lots of grammar issues, odd wording, and unrealistic dialog. An example of this would be "im home my cute sister" which is something I think nobody would really say more like "Im home sis!". Just three things I would look out for overall good stuff.

A countryside boy moved to mansion as a servant of a noble girl

Chapter:1

Jun 28, 2022

Another Akua masterclass chapter

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:24

Jun 28, 2022

To:AkuaSenpai

Ah it's nothing. Have too give a person their flowers when it's rightfully their's. I'm just glad too support and give my thoughts as an audience member. Not too mention on this site we're all we got? Have too spread love and show it!

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:14

Jun 28, 2022

You can't do this too me 😭. Two plot twists in one chapter is too much but anyways I caught up. Your novel really had me wanting more. Greatness at its peak

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:23

Jun 28, 2022

Sakura is such a charm

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:21

Jun 28, 2022

This was a great character interaction. Only few chapters with Chika and it feels as if she's been here since the start

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:20

Jun 28, 2022

"Research purposes" when you're a writer that's not eben a reach 😂

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:15

Jun 28, 2022

There's so much I want to say but I'll start off saying you're an amazing and talented writer. The fact you manage too make me picture the events is just nice. This definitely deserves a Manga adaptation in the future. There's something I love about this chapter. It felt different but in a way the same as the others. It's just great. Officially addicted too reading this.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:14

Jun 27, 2022

Top tier action sequence the past two chapters. Keep it up

Fantasy Life

Chapter:3

Jun 27, 2022

"Give me strength" 😭. Incoming shounen power up 😂

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:13

Jun 27, 2022

These two would make a nice pair.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:11

Jun 27, 2022

Akira! You got this king!

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:10

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