Oct 11, 2022

This was so cute, aaaaaa. Also, reading such a lovely short story like this one while in physics class, for some reason, it make even better. Good work.

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Sep 11, 2022

Oh... farewell Séquard. And looks like the homunculus are not to blame in this one.

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Sep 11, 2022

yeah, yeah, no one wants to die- WHAT???? A HUMAN?? I need explanations, right now!

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Sep 11, 2022

Amazing how you narrated Betty's vision, simply amazing. And I know Jin is trying her best to save the creature, but there is a child involved, so I'm in Séquard's side in this one.

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Sep 02, 2022

To:Deleted User

Can they hold for three minutes?? Are you sure? There are a lot of enemies. And unfortunately, the space marine legion won't be able to help, hahaha.

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

hahahaha, for him was obvious

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Aug 31, 2022

To:Deleted User

Well, he is talented, yet I don't think he will be a Mary Sue, but I may be partial to judge. Thanks for notifying me though.

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Aug 30, 2022

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Well, he is a pilot now, hahahaha. And indeed Ulysses is, acting with all that superiority air.

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Aug 29, 2022

That is, legit, the brilliant thing I read this week so far. Simply amazing

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Aug 29, 2022

To:Deleted User

Well, you are not wrong, but the possibility of all that he ever believed, being just a made up story, is not something you can deal with lightly. But don't worry, they will keep their focus on the terrorists for a long time. Thanks for keep on reading.

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Aug 27, 2022

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They have a whole plan in motion, they won't give up any time soon. Let's see what will happen next.

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Aug 26, 2022

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Indeed, if the criminals knew that someone inexperienced like Rafael was piloting, the squad would be in serious trouble. Thanks for keep on reading.

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Aug 25, 2022

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Great question, I'm just not going to answer here because it will be on the first paragraph of the next chapter hahaha. Thanks for keep on reading.

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Aug 24, 2022

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Many were just waiting for a chance to finally put an end to govern, and what a better opportunity than this one. Now things will get intense for the army to control. Thanks to keep on reading.

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Aug 18, 2022

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Well, they are basically at war, and not truly prepared for it, thanks for keep on reading.

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