Feb 16, 2019
To:X. K. Ajal
Don't worry for "probably" most of us english isn't our first language, here we come for a good story first he he
Feb 15, 2019
Overall, well I do enjoy the premise of such stories I hope you continue on with it. Aside a couple of spelling errors and getting a bit lost at some parts I hope to read more. Elves, Dragons and other types of fantasy races are a must for me and you added on a spiritual level with the Souls aspect. Keep it up
Dec 01, 2018
Thanks, as for the next few mayor arcs I'm going to focus on things in Dalmatia. As such the military will get a lot of attention the 1st Royal and 2nd Titans later on the navy as well will all get to play their part and I will try to expand on their backstory lore and such...
ps. since you said you like the military genre and all that, then I can't wait to introduce the 2nd Titans more in-depth one of my favorite characters will then make an appearance keep an eye out for the Mad Forest Fairy and one of my favorite places Wolf Festung.
Oct 27, 2018
Thanks, ill keep it in mind for future times, it's all trial an error, in the beginning, I do have trouble with the way I sometimes structure my sentences I will try to fix.
Still glad you took the time to read and reply your opinion appreciate it.
Oct 27, 2018
Thanks for the input, can you point out some examples to me I do like getting a second opinion on it. And I will try to keep it the same when describing things in the future.
Oct 07, 2018
Sorry to hear that I genuinely can't say I heard something like that happening to other people I did have a new chapter published that did not show up on the New Novel list and that's about it but deleting the whole chapter did you tried contacting Honeyfeed about the bug.
Sep 07, 2018
Well what i do at least in the beginning is keep the number of characters down to two or three named ones, so when you read the story it's not a conversation between ten or twelve people so you have no idea how says what or who is talking to whom you get it. And then you as a reader have the chance to learn and get to know them, and then as the story progress i add on more named characters and locations and so on
Sep 07, 2018
you know, it's not a bad chapter but the amount of times i red Nesto this Nesto that it started to sound repetitive i'm sure you don't have to keep mentioning his name so often. Maybe it's just me so some people don't mind it so much