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Just a 22 y.o. webnovel writer from Greece ๐ฌ๐ท
If you donโt like dope stories, then feel free to ignore this account ๐
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May 01, 2023
To:IceDonut
Uff, I just spoiled something without realising, didnโt I? Damn ๐๐๐ Nevertheless Iโm eager to see what you think down the line, and thank you for the constant support! โค๏ธ
To:Yuuki
Wow I didnโt know that! Regardless I feel like itโs something fresh for me personally so I appreciate it ๐
Apr 30, 2023
Love how everyone is a member of the Yuyo fan club so openly ๐๐ I bet Minori is somewhat jealous of Kyashii and Tomoka for securing presents from Yuyo though ๐๐ Tomoka is such a nice comedy relief as well I love her to bits ๐ค I believe youโve created a very lovable set of characters Muishiki i think congratulations are in order ๐ What was that though? That gyaru wants to bait Yuyo? I can already see her reply though and itโs probably a โnahโ ๐๐
Kyashii is adorable and Tomoka is well, Tomoka ๐ believe me when I said I laughed out loud at that โWHAT?!โ ๐ as soon as I saw kouhai-san mentioned in Yuyoโs thoughts I was like nah this is going south ๐ Props to Yuyo though for realising that she actually IS jealous ๐ค she certainly isnโt dense due to a lack of brain cells thatโs for sure, she just needs a little nudge towards the right direction!
Man ain't wasting any time he went straight for that hug! ๐ป Eri was the first person in a while that didn't compliment Ryo's cooking I bet ๐ I like how simple, short and bite-sized your chapters are!
Yes, now this is intriguing! I like how you took the cliche of the perfect girl and loser dude and turned it on its head! Eager to see how this plays out!
P.S. Can I get Ryo to cook for me or something? Dude's an A grade chef at 17! My guy is going places ๐
Nah man Eri's life is rough to say the least ๐ญ sounds like the kind of setup a character that is about to get isekaid gets ๐ Your writing style though is rather unique, like adding the bold phrases as a form of description. If I had to give a piece of advice that would probably be to add full stops when necessary, since some phrases seem to drag out a bit. For example, this one maybe "I couldn't even cry at my own mom's funeral how pathetic, everyone around me cried all of my family was in tears and i stood out like a sore thumb" etc etc. I think saying it like that takes some emotion out of the scene. Still though, I'm eager to see what lies ahead, and thank you for writing!
Trust me when I say that Donut, but I liked your theory to the extent I thought of making it a reality for a brief time, but sadly that would blast a hole through the plans I had laid out for both Naomi and Yume ๐ญ Still a great theory though, and yet there are still many more things I think you won't see coming down the line ๐ That last part though, I won't say till you see for yourself my friend! Thank you for reading as always! โค๏ธ
Kyashii realizing Yuyo is jealous before even Yuyo herself ๐ Nice one, that's my gyal! From what I can see here though, it seemed Minori got flustered when Yuyo talked about her tutoring Tomoka.... could this be the hint we were all waiting for?! What if beneath her reprimading tone, and straight laced attitude, Minori is in fact, crushing on TOMOKA?! Muishiki you little rascal ๐คฉ
Apr 29, 2023
To:Deleted User
Exactly! Unpaid overtime sucks big time ๐ค And yes Eiji would probably name it Neko for sure though ๐ Iโll pass on the motivational vibes to Eiji Tomo thank you for reading as always! ๐คโค๏ธ
To:YoruWrites๐ฎ
Hehe potential romance huh? Letโs see then shall we? ๐ Naomi really needs them lessons though ngl ๐ Thank you for reading Bikergirlhacker! โค๏ธ
Apr 23, 2023
Damn Kyashii used blackmail! Itโs super effective! ๐ต Yuyoโs HP has been depleted to 0 ๐ and soon her stamina too! I knew Kyashii asked for that photo immediately! ๐๐ And plus you have to love how Tomoka always fuels the fire further no matter what yet she acts all giddy and clueless ๐ Tomoka is the real devil here imo but thatโs also why I love her ๐ค
Ayooooo Yuyo moving mad in her sleep!!! ๐๐ The funny thing is how Nazumi wanted to show Kyashii the photo without anyone else seeing it ๐๐ I already know Kyashii said โsend that to me ASAP ๐คจโ With all that chaos though, Iโm guessing Yuyo and everyone else will completely forget about the sneezing photo ๐ญ Can we get an illustration of that please and thank you?
Me? Killing an innocent person? I would never ๐คญ I think you did a good job guessing the quiet girl as a potential love interest though ๐ what remains to be seen is what will or wonโt come true right? As regards to the occult club, glad to see you noticed the mention, and you have a very solid take too! Thank you for reading Donut-dono! ๐ซถ๐ป
Hehe so youโre team quiet girl over Hatsue? Intriguing ๐ Eiji really is a fight magnet though so heโs kinda like a 999 level boss right now after so much farmed XP ๐ Thank you for reading Tomo! ๐ซถ๐ป