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Just a 23 y.o. webnovel writer from Greece ๐ฌ๐ท
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Nov 20, 2024
Okay Marsia POV is back ๐ค and as expected her parents treat her like a century old vase about to crumble into pieces ๐ I feel for her man, although Iโm jealous of all the ๐ธ but money canโt bring happiness! (Although Iโd love a few million just to check yk) SO THE FACT THEY WERE ACCUSED OF THE DEATHS BEFORE THEY HAPPENED WAS AN ACTUAL THING! How the fuck does that happen man ๐ค Maybe it was like a predetermined fact somehow? And that sigil appearing and disappearing along with the memories shows signs of two different timelines again ๐ค Man I really wanna get to the bottom of this!
NAAAAAH this gets wilder with every new chapter ๐ญ๐ญ SO THEY DID KILL 4 POLICE OFFICERS? But they killed them AFTER the news cast ๐ค But there was that symbol again ๐ค Yep now Iโm confused. Skyler did mention parallel realities tho which could MEAN something ๐ Man poor Arufa tho, it must have destroyed her realising she actually took human lives instead of just destroying bots ๐ฅฒ
To:ArufaBeta
OH! So the handshake was just timed with the event making the reader believe it was involved in some way ๐คฃ Nice touch!
AHA! So Marsia and Locri have the same symbol too! Okay I kinda take back what I said last chapter! I think their handshake literally broke the matrix of the universe or something ๐ It's like they're forced to forget or what... I still love the pairing of Locri and Marsia tho ๐ Poor manager man she got yeeted ๐
Wow now I'm thoroughly confused ngl I guessed the weird handshake would have some sort of side effect on Arufa but that's next level ๐ There's probably some kind of parallel universe Arufa and Skyler are tapping into maybe? Maybe the only thing separating them and their selves on the other universe being the tattoo? But Arufa did steal yesterday didn't she? Or was it only the tattooed Arufa we saw there? Damn I'm probably yapping but this mystery has me hooked ngl ๐ญ Marsia will probably experience something similar, right? ๐
I love how innocent and good-mannered Marsia is honestly ๐ญ She wouldn't survive a nanosecond in the Underside without Locri fs tho๐ It was nice to see the POV of those two in the handshake incident!
Hideo did exactly what I expected him to do ngl bro needs to take anger management classes ๐ญ Akai evaded him epicly tho I love his unbothered attitude paired with the "Okay I'm out this dude gonna kill me" decision ๐ I iamgine him running down the corridor with a deadpan expression Okay Enma is a mood ๐ Every problem can be solved with dog cuddling
Nah this story took such a turn I could have never predicted ๐ญ Truly in line with the creepy Halloween vibe ๐ Iโm just sad it didnโt win anything because it definitely deserved more! Youโve built on the final twist so nice throughout and incorporated the cliffhanger masterfully in every chapter end! What a fun short read this was Luc! Glad I came round to finishing it although a tad late!
No no no I canโt my beautiful happy friends what have they come to ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ Man Blanche is obsessed, unhinged and ruthless ๐ (can I have her phone number? Nah jk jk) WHAT AN EPIC TWIST MAN! Poor Maria tho ๐ป
IM SORRY JUST LOST MY COMPOSURE THERE BUT WTF ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ nah that twist man come on Luc youโre evil ๐ But what an evil twist you cooked there! Blanche was actually a psycho all along ๐ญ
AYOOOOOO WHATEFJJRJRJEJEDJJEJEJWJJWHSHHDHEJEHHEHEHEHEHHRHDHJDWHWHQHQUUQ NO NO NO ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Aha the memory wipe fog damn ๐ญ๐ญ Nevermind dying but being erased as well? Thatโs brutal man ๐ Iโm getting increasingly nervous here ngl ๐
Ah man poor Radio Jam my bro lost the plot there going wild on that cube android ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ Can I say how much I appreciate your writing in fighting scenes tho? Absolutely epic Luc ๐ค Hope the detective is lenient with Radio man, and he doesnโt actually go to prison or idk ๐ Maybe escape? ๐
To:Taylor J
Nah the pun was beautiful ๐คฃ That joke is right up my alley Taylor ngl ๐ค The captain is always analysingโฆ Thatโs her nature yk ๐ Thank you for reading Taylor! โค๏ธ