Nov 23, 2023
Okay this looks like the most appropriate place to review this story in whole, but first let me say a big thank you for writing, and an even bigger congratulations for finishing! ❤️ Trust me when I say you don’t need to apologise about anything, although you’ve heard me say that a lot despite it 🤣 Writing a story is never an easy task, and especially with a deadline to boot! So the fact you simply finished it is enough, and it feels way better to wrap it up in a way you’re proud of, than just rushing blindly to meet some deadline! So hold your head proudly, Yoru-San! 🫡
Well for the review now, I’ll try to keep it on the shorter side, since I’ve been trying to keep myself from yapping too much in general and while writing too 😅
Let me start by saying in the time span of a year and something more (I think?) I can already see the improvement in every chapter of yours and this work again shows your growth. I think that while you didn’t exactly swim far off from your safe waters (genres so to speak) you kept giving it your own little spark and touch at times that made it uniquely yours! Your development is there that’s for sure, and having seen you write all throughout this phase I am very glad 🤝
As for the story itself now, I’d say it was a pretty fun ride all the way to the end, and while the conflicts were significant, they could have used a little more touch and spice as to how they were resolved. HOWEVER, the way it all concluded was very satisfying and the epilogue was just pure bliss. I think your strong suit shines through in all your works, and I’ll say it again that you’re really good at writing wholesome, simple cute moments ❤️ SoL is a nice relaxing genre for many readers and giving it your sugar sweet vbe makes for a nice combo!
All in all, I’d say I’m very glad to have read this, and I can’t wait for more of your stories and ideas! Thanks for writing and for all your efforts! I know it was difficult, which is why my congratulations are even more heartfelt ❤️
